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Happy H/D Holidays chisox727!! | A Gryffindor and a Slytherin walk into a bar... - R

Jan 14, 2007 15:42

Title: A Gryffindor and a Slytherin walk into a bar...
Recipient's name: For chisox727
Author: nmalfoySummary: Of all the bars in all the world, Draco had ( Read more... )

[fic], round: winter 2006, rated: r

Comments 46

the_minx_17 January 14 2007, 23:13:44 UTC

I loved this and the last line 'bout killed me.

nmalfoy January 15 2007, 05:26:02 UTC

And you know, that last line was just a last minute random thing. I typed it and wasn't sure if I should keep it or not, but I'm glad I did, and I am so glad you liked it!

drgaellon January 17 2007, 02:17:38 UTC

Sorry, love, but that last line is just total non sequitur. You need SOMETHING about muffins earlier in the story.

Your icon amuses me, because I had mental images of a Casablanca homage, with "Harry's" being "Rick's Americaine"...

twistedm January 14 2007, 23:14:01 UTC

ooohh... i liked it!! the "...snape..." thing, very cute.

nmalfoy January 15 2007, 05:26:53 UTC

*grin* The boys really wrote this. I just typed down what they said, and for something that personal, I couldn't see Draco just coming out and saying it.

cold_poet January 15 2007, 00:27:56 UTC

Oh, that was brilliant. So cute, so funny. \o/ *G*

nmalfoy January 15 2007, 05:27:18 UTC

Thank you! *curtsies*

dragonfly_lily January 15 2007, 00:46:16 UTC

For me? SQUEEE! I am so excited! This was totally awesome and just what I wanted! You did a great job making my boys exactly as I like them! BEST PRESENT EVER!!!

"He’s about as useful as that dying philodendron in the entry.”
Potter looked hurt. “It’s not dying.” --That's precious! Draco's and Harry's characters are spot on!

He stalked out, stung, though his grand exit was marred a bit by the fact that he tripped on the carpet in the doorway.--That made me laugh out loud!

Potter grinned. “Of course we can talk upstairs. We can talk any place, really. We could do it in a boat. We could do it with a goat. We could do it here and there. We could do it anywhere.”

Draco’s heart plummeted into his stomach. The war had finally taken its toll on Potter and he’d gone mental. ---As did this, but this time my husband asked me 'What the hell are you reading?'

“Harry. That’s my name. I want to hear you moan my name as I fuck you.” --Oh,that is hot!

“Yeah, I know you’re used to sheep, but-"--no comment needed!

But if Harry could make ( ... )

nmalfoy January 15 2007, 05:18:05 UTC

Oh, whew... I'm so glad you liked it! It's hard to write for someone you don't know and I was just sort of hoping it didn't suck, you know? *grin* I had a lot of fun writing it--as you can see, I'm rather a smartass so I was just hoping you didn't want flowery schmoop, you know?

dragonfly_lily January 15 2007, 16:21:04 UTC

I LOVED it! I love snarky, sarcastic comments and would have been disappointed if it was flowery/sugary sweetness. I like happy endings but I can't read pure fluff. I NEED smartass funny comments!

Well done!

nmalfoy January 15 2007, 17:37:47 UTC

You sound like my kind of person. You know, at a party? If you can't say something nice about someone, come sit next to me? *grin*

ladymorgana13 January 15 2007, 01:22:53 UTC

oh so HOT and that last line made me spit out my drink!*mops up keyboard* well done!

nmalfoy January 15 2007, 05:27:47 UTC

Sorry about the keyboard! But thank you!