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Happy H/D Holidays chisox727!! | A Gryffindor and a Slytherin walk into a bar... - R

Jan 14, 2007 15:42

Title: A Gryffindor and a Slytherin walk into a bar...
Recipient's name: For chisox727
Author: nmalfoySummary: Of all the bars in all the world, Draco had ( Read more... )

[fic], round: winter 2006, rated: r

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dragonfly_lily January 15 2007, 00:46:16 UTC

For me? SQUEEE! I am so excited! This was totally awesome and just what I wanted! You did a great job making my boys exactly as I like them! BEST PRESENT EVER!!!

"He’s about as useful as that dying philodendron in the entry.”
Potter looked hurt. “It’s not dying.” --That's precious! Draco's and Harry's characters are spot on!

He stalked out, stung, though his grand exit was marred a bit by the fact that he tripped on the carpet in the doorway.--That made me laugh out loud!

Potter grinned. “Of course we can talk upstairs. We can talk any place, really. We could do it in a boat. We could do it with a goat. We could do it here and there. We could do it anywhere.”

Draco’s heart plummeted into his stomach. The war had finally taken its toll on Potter and he’d gone mental. ---As did this, but this time my husband asked me 'What the hell are you reading?'

“Harry. That’s my name. I want to hear you moan my name as I fuck you.” --Oh,that is hot!

“Yeah, I know you’re used to sheep, but-"--no comment needed!

But if Harry could make muffins like he could fuck, Draco decided he could live with the situation.--Great last line. I would like to eat some of those...muffins.

You're awesome! Thank you so much! You've made my day and my Christmas!

nmalfoy January 15 2007, 05:18:05 UTC

Oh, whew... I'm so glad you liked it! It's hard to write for someone you don't know and I was just sort of hoping it didn't suck, you know? *grin* I had a lot of fun writing it--as you can see, I'm rather a smartass so I was just hoping you didn't want flowery schmoop, you know?

dragonfly_lily January 15 2007, 16:21:04 UTC

I LOVED it! I love snarky, sarcastic comments and would have been disappointed if it was flowery/sugary sweetness. I like happy endings but I can't read pure fluff. I NEED smartass funny comments!

Well done!

nmalfoy January 15 2007, 17:37:47 UTC

You sound like my kind of person. You know, at a party? If you can't say something nice about someone, come sit next to me? *grin*

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