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After re-reading this-I decided it wasn't a great start off to a long journey. It lacked punch. There was only a hint of spice-it was missing a lot. So I did a little research and decided to look up some methods of beginning a novel. I was struck with some good luck and found Uncle Orson's Writing Class (Orson Scott Card who wrote ( Read more... )

Full Summary: Piece Ryder has never been a man of words, but the few he's shared have been a blunt mess of tears. Thus, he's quite the loner, but after reading a definition he finds his life has changed. Things have depth-people aren't the simple 2D beings he thought they were. People had meaning. He comes across a man named Seven. Seven is... ( Read more... )