I Want To Live! (Side story) Part (2/2)

[harajunko86]

Title: I Want To Live! (Side story) Part (2/2)

Pairing: (Main) KyuMin, (Side) KangTeuk, HanChul, SiMin (one-sided only)

Genre: Angst, attempted humour (might fail miserably) and romance

Rating: PG-13

Disclaimer: Seriously, do I have to do this everytime?! *annoyed* The boys don’t belong to me. PERIOD.

Notes: Words in ‘italics’ are thoughts/flashbacks.

Comments

[naomibe]

Describe the story through Siwon’s eyes, and his past, is a good idea. It’s easiest to understand his love (or obsession) for Sungmin (OK, it’s very easy to love Sungmin…). It’s a one-side love, but I like their weird bond a lot.

I especially like the passage where Sungmin becomes MIN. There’s no details about his first assignment, but all is describe by his body’s expression when he comes back to Siwon.
Siwon, in this time, is still « innocent ». This first assignment is like a rite of passage between childhood and adulthood.

Heechul is very good in his role of « Death Princess ». It reminds me few lines of a book, about a murderer : for him, to kill was the only job he dreamed (something like that). Even if Im’ apprehensive, I’m eager to see him in action.
And other characters appear ! Hankyung + Wookies’ drug VS Siwon = Siwon KO.

Siwon is like a child - OK, a dangerous child - crossing life’s ordeals : he lost his parents, he discovered friendship and love with Sungmin, he became « Priest »… and he became jealous when Sungmin falls in love with Kyu. He evolves only with him.

Great job ;) ! <3
Good luck for your exams !

[harajunko86]

woah!! i just love your long post! <3
Since Siwon is only telling his side of the story, he doesn't know much about Sungmin's first kill. Sungmin will be narrating that part himself later on. Something drastic and traumatising must've happened to change Sungmin into such a cold-blooded killer. Jeng, jeng, jeng... But I felt kinda bad for young Siwonnie to go through such a hard life but it had to be done in order for his current possessiveness over Sungmin.

I wanted to make Heechul a little more eccentric in his killings. But I'm facing difficulty in that part so please bear with my with my poor writing skills. Sometimes, I can't seem to potray what is going on in my mind. And yea, he will be in action soon. I will also put on how he joined Kyuhyun's side and of course, Hanchul part as well.

And I laughed at your 'Hankyung + Wookies’ drug VS Siwon = Siwon KO.' Didn't think of that when I wrote it. hahaha... Siwon will do whatever it costs to get Sungmin back.

Thank you!! I will try to update soon. I hope. Thank you for commenting.