[fic] naran saram

Jan 23, 2011 21:09

나란 사람/someone like me [6/?]
Kyuhyun/girl!Sungmin; PG-15 (might change); 25929 words; chaptered
Kyuhyun's best friend will always be his little girl, even when she grows up.
a/n: please inform me of any glaring errors 'ㅅ' apology for the wait at the end of this chapter

part 1 | part 2 | part 3 | part 4 | part 5 | part 6

06 I want to know why you won't love me )

kpop: super junior, otp: kyumin, fic

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halomaschine January 25 2011, 02:54:55 UTC
A... a whole new worldddddd~ sry too busy bumbling around like an embarrassed twat because you are so flattering u_u

Irritating is putting it far too kindly, lol. Half the time I am sympathizing with him because I kind of have to, but the other half I am in line with every frustrated comment I've ever received, thinking he should just get over it already ;-; But watching Korean dramas has taught me that I'm an amateur at creating drawn-out stories... this is nothing compared to a drama. I could make this really painfully annoying if I wanted to >:3 thank god I don't want to suffer anymore than anybody else~

I think I lamented to another commenter a few chapters ago about how I want to write Sungmin's POV, too. There are a handful of moments where I think "fuck, Min's reaction would've been much more entertaining than Kyu's crying and whining about his little girl." Especially because it's painfully obvious that Kyu has no idea what's going on in Min's head ;_; which means we can only rely on what he observes, and he spends too much of his time trying not to observe her, so... >_> Anyway, I agree with your curiosity, and it's been one of the things frustrating me as I write.

I am not butthurt if readers don't comment every time. I accept responsibility if they don't; if I were a reader I would boycott leaving feedback until Kyu jumped Min, tbh. But I'm glad you did tell me your thoughts~ especially about Min's POV; the only reason it isn't included is because this story came to me sort of suddenly from Kyu's POV and I wrote a lot of it on auto-pilot. Once it's been posted and time has passed, then I see where I would've done things differently but it's too late to go back. Maybe somehow I can work it in after the fact~

WHY CAN'T I BE MORE SUCCINCT /SHOT

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