Comments | haldoor_honey: Lost fic: By the Time I Get to Phoenix, Part Eight

haldoor_honey

Lost fic: By the Time I Get to Phoenix, Part Eight - Same Mistake

Oct 02, 2009 22:54

Title: By the Time I Get to Phoenix, Part 8: Same Mistake

Pairing: Sawyer/Sayid, Sawyer/OC

Rating: NC-17 for violence and semi-consensual sexual activity.

Word Count: 5138 this part

Beta: My good friend gregoria44, who continues to help me with some very basic things.

Disclaimer: I don't own Lost, nor do I make any money from my wild imaginings.

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Comments 16

sevedra October 2 2009, 11:02:17 UTC

I don't have time to read this right now! I am SO VERY EXCITED to see it posted though! As soon as I get finished with whatever stuff I am doing today and have some downtime in my hotel room, I am ALL OVER THIS!

love you!

haldoor_honey October 3 2009, 02:05:35 UTC

Hee! Well, Ihope it's to your liking! Thanks for letting me know you're onto it!

Love you too!!!

sevedra October 5 2009, 19:47:55 UTC

Oh! Thank goodness they got Sawyer out of that mess! Hopefully they can all go back to LA and figure themselves out. This was a great chapter. Sorry my comment is so late. I had a really full weekend.

haldoor October 6 2009, 05:11:14 UTC

Np on the lateness! It'll always wait, and no comments are ever too late! I just hope it was a good weekend!

Thanks, my dear! LKet's hope you're right and they do manage to sort themselves out. They can be terribly ineffective about communicating... so we'll see! ;-)

ullman79 October 2 2009, 12:24:37 UTC

Good to see (and read of course, heh) another chapter, rather enjoying this one and can't wait to see where the next chapter will take these boys. Thanks for sharing!

haldoor_honey October 3 2009, 02:12:59 UTC

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I'm very pleased to hear you're enjoying it! ;-)

jaydblu October 2 2009, 21:32:38 UTC

Well! That was very interesting! At least Sawyer is out of that place. Poor Sayid having to watch that.

I can't wait to see where you go with this...I hope that it ends with them mending their sexual relationships and heading toward something better for all of them.

haldoor_honey October 3 2009, 02:32:15 UTC

Yeah, it's not been pretty so far, but getting him out is the thing we've all been hoping for.

Oh, mending things and getting better are what it's all about... eventually! I hope you'll enjoy what's to come, anyway! Thanks, as ever, for sticking with this! ;-)

alemyrddin October 5 2009, 12:56:55 UTC

yay for another chapter of this!!

I was so happy to finally see Noel taken away by the cops!
(he won't turn out to be Jack's brother, right??)

Let's hope the three of them can start getting better now.
:)

haldoor October 6 2009, 05:12:20 UTC

Hee! He's not Jack's brother, no!

I do hope they get their act together in the way you would like!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! ;-)

nomango October 6 2009, 10:11:26 UTC

I just found this, can't believe I missed an update - you know, when you said you were writing me fic, I never expected an epic! :) Thanks a lot. Neverending tales for the win! :)

I'm hating seeing him suffer, but he suffers so goooood *g*

haldoor_honey October 6 2009, 17:30:39 UTC

Hee! I don't know where it came from, but quite evidently, you provided an excellent prompt! My muses certainly ran with it! I just hope the rest isn't disappointing... and there's just something about seeing Sawyer suffer, isn't there? I think you were right before when you said something about no-one looking quite as good bound (and the pain and misery just go hand in hand). Of course, he really needs Jack and Sayid to rescue him, so we getting the added h/c involved. *sigh*

Thanks again, love! Your encouragement is appreciated!!!