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h_itoshi

From Blue Sky - Chapter 4/15

Feb 02, 2017 22:21

Title: From Blue Sky
Status: 4/15
Fandom: Hey! Say! JUMP
Pairing: None. Main characters are Yabu, Hikaru, Yamada and Chinen.
Overall rating: PG-15 for minor character death and depictions of violence
Warnings: AU. I made Chinen 11 years old which is what the plot revolves around.
Wordcount: 3801

Summary: "He's a cute boy, isn't he?" Takaki says, his ( Read more... )

g: hey!say!jump, j-pop, fanfiction, *chapterfic

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sanadas_sanity February 2 2017, 23:48:05 UTC

Oh gosh. With every chapter I fall more and more in love with this story. I love how good Hikaru is with Chinen. How protective he over him and just does whatever Chinen wants. Which is so, so, so in character for Chinen too cause he always got his way when he was younger.

I absolutely adore how everything is progressing. How they're worried they're going to get caught with Chinen for kidnapping. Which is definitely fair. I mean he was on the front page of the newspaper since his mother died.

I think my favorite scene of the entire fic is the one on the train. How Hikaru claims one side of the train for himself and then Yabu just attacks Yamada cause he knows there's something really suspicious of him (also just the image of it was really hot for some reason. Let me fan myself really quick thinking about Yabu attacking Yamada)

I definitely think Yabu knows Yamada is in that gang, but I don't think he realizes how much shit Yamada is in for not killing Chinen. And you still have my sitting on the edge of my seat for what Yabu and Hikaru ( ... )

h_itoshi February 4 2017, 21:18:11 UTC

I know I've said this but I love your comments <3

I figured it's very canon for Chinen to be spoiled, so I made him extra spoiled haha.

I'm happy you like the train scene, I loved writing it so~

Also I had this happy fluttery feeling when you said you love False Actor, it's my first Jump fic so it means a lot :3

sanadas_sanity February 4 2017, 21:31:48 UTC

I love leaving comments, and I'm trying to get better with leaving comments on fics I adore.

Also I'm absolutely dying over what movie you based this off of cause the story makes me want to watch it xD

False Actor is easily in my top ten favorite Jump fics, and its what got me into AriYama as a pairing, to be honest.

h_itoshi February 4 2017, 21:51:05 UTC

Good, you're great at it!! (I personally suck at commenting, I'm ashamed to say)

Hehe. I have a feeling A LOT of people already have watched it, but if no one figures it out I'll let you know at the end.

Really?? That is so good to hear, thank you. AriYama is a great pair after all~

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