From Blue Sky - Chapter 4/15

[h_itoshi]

Title: From Blue Sky
Status: 4/15
Fandom: Hey! Say! JUMP
Pairing: None. Main characters are Yabu, Hikaru, Yamada and Chinen.
Overall rating: PG-15 for minor character death and depictions of violence
Warnings: AU. I made Chinen 11 years old which is what the plot revolves around.
Wordcount: 3801

Summary: "He's a cute boy, isn't he?" Takaki says, his

Comments

[sanadas_sanity]

Oh gosh. With every chapter I fall more and more in love with this story. I love how good Hikaru is with Chinen. How protective he over him and just does whatever Chinen wants. Which is so, so, so in character for Chinen too cause he always got his way when he was younger.

I absolutely adore how everything is progressing. How they're worried they're going to get caught with Chinen for kidnapping. Which is definitely fair. I mean he was on the front page of the newspaper since his mother died.

I think my favorite scene of the entire fic is the one on the train. How Hikaru claims one side of the train for himself and then Yabu just attacks Yamada cause he knows there's something really suspicious of him (also just the image of it was really hot for some reason. Let me fan myself really quick thinking about Yabu attacking Yamada)

I definitely think Yabu knows Yamada is in that gang, but I don't think he realizes how much shit Yamada is in for not killing Chinen. And you still have my sitting on the edge of my seat for what Yabu and Hikaru

[h_itoshi]

I know I've said this but I love your comments <3

I figured it's very canon for Chinen to be spoiled, so I made him extra spoiled haha.

I'm happy you like the train scene, I loved writing it so~

Also I had this happy fluttery feeling when you said you love False Actor, it's my first Jump fic so it means a lot :3

[sanadas_sanity]

I love leaving comments, and I'm trying to get better with leaving comments on fics I adore.

Also I'm absolutely dying over what movie you based this off of cause the story makes me want to watch it xD

False Actor is easily in my top ten favorite Jump fics, and its what got me into AriYama as a pairing, to be honest.

[h_itoshi]

Good, you're great at it!! (I personally suck at commenting, I'm ashamed to say)

Hehe. I have a feeling A LOT of people already have watched it, but if no one figures it out I'll let you know at the end.

Really?? That is so good to hear, thank you. AriYama is a great pair after all~

[sanadas_sanity]

I tend to forget a lot cause I read fic on my phone most of the time xD I'm working on it though! Especially since there are kind people that will comment on mine.

Sounds like a plan for me. I'll just have to sit in anticipation until the very end

Mhm! And they really are. If I knew how to write Daiki I would have a fic for them already. His character is just so hard to nail down for some reason?

[h_itoshi]

Haha aww xD It is more difficult commenting from phone though, lj is horrible with that.

Actually I think Daiki is difficult too? That's why I went with AU haha, oops. But he's like... acting like a crazy teenager all the time and still he's an adult and I don't know how to make him serious? Kind of, idk haha.

[sanadas_sanity]

And sometimes you wanna reference something that happened in the fic, but you pretty much have to delete your comment in LJ in order to remember what you wanted to talk about. It's horrible

I mean, you gotta do what you have to. Plus he's usually the butt of a lot of their jokes?? And he usually doesn't react too much. He either gets frustrated or he just stands there and doesn't say anything. But you put it really well. He's like a teen stuck in an adult's body

[h_itoshi]

Oh yes, quoting is a no can do on mobile, you're right about that. I don't read much at all these days, which is pretty sad actually, so I don't often encounter that problem.

He is, he's... easygoing? I'm not sure. I don't know that much about him compared to the others I think, either.

[sanadas_sanity]

to be honest, i just stick to a few fic writer that I know of and don't read anything else besides what they post. It's just easier that way.

That's the thing! And I pointed this out to a friend of mine. Typically with groups you don't learn a lot about the guys who are the MCs! Cause they're usually facilitating the conversations. So they don't get a lot of time to put in themselves and their stories.

[h_itoshi]

Same. I used to be more into kisumai but then kind of switched group, and... there isn't much jumpfic out there that I want to read. It takes so much effort to wade through all the fic that's posted for things that I like :( So it's definitely easier sticking to just a few good authors.

True, definitely true! Damn those MCs haha.
Also I don't see translations of his things much, and since I don't speak japanese at all I'm very dependant on those for info heh.

[sanadas_sanity]

and a lot of the fic writers that I've found are either on hiatus or don't write for the fandom anymore, which is incredibly sad. it sounds bad but a lot of fic i see i'm not interested in for one reason or another. and its really like...if you're not into arashi you don't get a lot of fic.

I never actually noticed that. His stuff doesn't get translated hardly, if ever. Yeah I see his photos on twitter sometimes but never translations of interviews or anything. And I'm in the same boat at you. I'm dependent on translations

[h_itoshi]

Agreed, and I'm not... I mean I like Arashi but they're not even in my top three? So I mostly think that if I want to read something specific, I'll probably have to write it myself orz.
It doesn't sound bad, I'm the same. I don't read fic without good language for example, no matter what it's about.

I've thought about it some, because most of the others do get translated. But I only read Daiki in crosstalks and such? I guess there's no super dedicated international fan of him.

[sanadas_sanity]

I like them too, but I didn't start out shipping any of the members, so it's a little weird for me to be able to read any of their fic. And that's the exact mindset I have. If I have a story I want to read or a pairing I have to write it. Also agreeing with that. Good grammar is a must.

And I honestly wonder why there isn't a dedicated fan for him?? Cause he's really adorable and he's funny when he's around Yamada and put into weird situations. Cause I think I've run into a dedicated fan for each of the members except him??

[h_itoshi]

I'm not that picky with pairs no matter the group, so I can read, but. I obviously prefer groups I care more about.

I think he might be a common #2 fave actually? Like everyone likes Daiki but he's not often THE ONE? It's just a theory of mine but I feel like I've encountered a lot of people who really like Daiki, but still has a different favourite member.
I think I've yet to see a Chinen and a Takaki fan, but otherwise yes, I've seen them too.

[sanadas_sanity]

I just have a few people I can't see in romantic pairings so I don't read their fic as often. The story has to be juuuuuust right.

I feel like I've seen that a lot?? The more that I think about it, that is. It's like he's there for everyone and they enjoy him but its not enough to take over the love of another member. I think one of my friends has Chinen as their bias, and a good friend of mine absolutely adores Takaki. She writes him into a lot of her fics

[h_itoshi]

Ah, I can understand the feeling, but I'm very Team All the Pairings no matter what haha.

Right? I'm not sure if that's a good quality or not.
That's nice at least, they all deserve adoring fans don't they.