Read it correctly aka not end stopped

Jan 09, 2008 21:18

Well.  I was doing once of those silly blogger applications.  More specifically, one that takes random phrases from your site and makes haikus out of them.  Most of them were trash, but there was this one that seemed nice.  I copied the code it told me to copy, but instead of the cutsy lil' box, the code was thrown right back at me, so I thought maybe I'd just write it out.  Upon further inspection, I realized it wasn't even a haiku.  I mean, I had always been taught that they're 5-7-5 and this one isn't.  Anyhow, even though it's unworthy, I decided to keep it.  May I now present to you, Rachel's Randomly Generated Non-Haiku:

can you be shaped
without boundaries is it too
late or am i.

sort of inspires me to write my own haiku:

Do you feel their urge?
You're the dead alleyway pin,
victim of the surge.

So maybe it doesn't have the merriest of attitudes, but I like it enough.
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