Ow, my brainmeats!

[gunsmoke_sues]

Story Or Series Title: Unknown Daughters. Now if that wasn't a Sue-ish title, I duuno what is.
Fandom: Trigun. (I haven't found many Cowboy Bebop sues of late.....most of them are just OC's....)
Culprit Author's Name: LifelongStampedeK
Summary: Two girls get sucked into the Trigun dimension and learn about thier pasts. R&R! CHAPPIE 9 UP!

Comments

[kouyama_mitsuki]

This story is utterly mind-boggling. It's... I'm... uh... stuponfounded. It kind of reminds me of one of the posts in a thread about Trigun at a little forum I visit... some guy said something like "I like wolfwoods cross, only mine is better cuz it's a storage container and he fills his full of weapons and mine is full of b33r". I wasn't really sure how to respond to that.

I do think I have a few things to say, though, whether they're coherent or not.
*Hey* Nicole (NWolfwood) typed.
* Hey Nicole* Kelly typed back.
* Wanna come over? * Kelly typed.
*we can watch Ep. 26 and M & D are working l8e*
*B right ova * Nicole typed.
* See u soon! * Kelly typed.
Oh, yes. I type just like this on AIM.

They used passwords when they went over to each other's houses, that way nobody would get kidnapped or anything.
More's the pity. O'course, surely if they got kidnapped they would have to be ReScUeD~ by some hAWT gUYZ :P~~~~~~~~~~~~~, so maybe it's for the best.

Nicole was about 6'3" with pixie-cut dark hair and blue-grey eyes.
Wait. So why were they worried anyway? A girl who is... er... 6'3" isn't going to be the most succulent, vulnerable target for most prospective kidnappers. I know people of all shapes and sizes get kidnapped, but... aw, who am I kidding? 6'3"? On a teenage girl?

Her father and Kelly's mother were both Greek and unrelated, so both of the girls had a slightly masculine cast to their features.
Beh... zuh? Being Greek and woman suddenly makes you She-Ra? I know several girls of Greek ancestry, and I don't consider them quite manly at all...

Suddenly some people got the bright idea to start shooting at the two thirteen-year- olds. "Crapcrapcrapcrapcrap!"
Thirteen. 6'3".

A man in a red coat with spiky blonde hair yelped while dodging a tossed dairy cow.
Do they even have cows on Gunsmoke? Maybe, but somehow I doubt it.

Wow. That was... pretty long. My bad for saying I had nothing to say, I suppose.

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[techno4tomcats]

I think the cow was an attempt at humour.
Attempt, mind you.

Heeh. B33r. That's funny and stupid.