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Fic: Need

Feb 22, 2011 09:29

Title: Need
Author: greta garbo
Fandom: Community
Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Rating: R (oh my!)
Word Count: 1715
Spoilers: Takes place during Intermediate Documentary Filmmaking
Notes: So.... this is the smuttiest thing I've ever written. *blushes* I know it's not nearly as smutty as a lot of stuff that's been posted in the J/A group, but it's the first remotely ( Read more... )

television: community, pairing: jeff/annie, fanfiction

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greta_garbo February 22 2011, 20:22:24 UTC

Thanks! This was really more practice, I guess, than anything. I'm working on another, bigger story that has a love scene in it, and I wanted to actually try it out in something like this before I went ahead with it for this other one.

khan81 February 22 2011, 17:27:49 UTC

He really wasn't good enough for her.

But he really, really wanted to be.

Loved those last two lines. This was a great story!

blond_bear February 22 2011, 18:05:28 UTC

Really loved this! The whole thing is great (you did an excellent job - no need to be worried there) but those last two lines just killed me.

Love these two and love the way you write them :)

redbrunja February 23 2011, 00:55:55 UTC

This was very fun!

chrisfaithalin February 23 2011, 06:23:14 UTC

I completely sympathize with the nerves of posting this, just went through the same thing recently. But, you had nothing to be nervous about. This was a fun read. The scene in the closet was great. I loved the line towards the end where Annie says that Jeff is her best friend. It was such a simple line, but it was so completely perfect. All around I really enjoyed the story.