Fic: When Jimmy Met Martha ch. 3

[greeneyedgirl42]

Title: When Jimmy Met Martha
Disclaimer: They ain’t mine. Don’t sue.
Rating: PG-13 to R for language and innuendo and violence.
Genre: Drama, Humor, and other such things.
Characters: Ten/Rose, Jack, Martha, Torchwood, Mickey, Jake, Jimmy, and others.
Beta: Thanks, DettiotA/N: This serves as the direct sequel to Rainy Day Woman

Comments

[watcher_junior]

(reviewing as I read...)

“They were all so shiny! I couldn’t choose.”

SO Ten. hehe. That was awesome. And I loved his dream. :)

“I feel pretty,” Jack muttered dreamily.

LMFAO. Oh, Jack. You are pretty. You're so pretty and witty and gay and I love you.

“Well…? Get on with it.”

Oh my God. Please tell me that's not his proposal!

*sigh* Poor Doctor. :(

You write these characters soooo well. I know I say that pretty much every time I comment on something you've written, but it's true!

[leighleighla]

LMFAO. Oh, Jack. You are pretty.

He is, isn't he?! *sigh*

Oh my God. Please tell me that's not his proposal!

It's that whole rude and not ginger thing.

[maniacalshen]

::random icon love::

[ivydoor]

I absolutely adore this. You've done a brilliant job and I can't wait to read the rest. *thumbs up*

[leighleighla]

Thanks!

[requialexa]

“You know in another twenty years she’ll be exactly like Jackie, yeah?”
I laughed right out loud at that! Brilliant line--gotta love your Jimmy.
“I feel pretty,” Jack muttered dreamily.
Gawd! I have visions of him breaking into song at that point!
“Something a little more romantic…and camp…”
And camp! So very Doctor-- Please tell me Rose appreciates that!
…as in Breakfast At
You've managed (again) to craft a viable and totally engaging story out of what should have been pure crack--and even (especially) during the proposal, keep them so perfectly in character!
FTW!!

[leighleighla]

Gawd! I have visions of him breaking into song at that point!

He totally wanted to. ;)

Thanks!

[svanderslice]

Amazing, as usual. I was so wrapped up in the dialogue, that when Jack said "I feel pretty," I seriously laughed out loud in my office. Then, at the end when the Doctor gets al angsty, I really felt for him.

This is a great story so far.

[leighleighla]

Thanks!

[maniacalshen]

I just read all three chapters, and I have to say that I love your Jimmy. (I also worked back and commented on a bunch of your older stories, if you didn't notice.) I mean, you can't be mad or offended at anything Jimmy says or does because it's not like you didn't see it coming. He's just...Jimmy.

“Doctor, did I ever thank you for bringing us dear James?”

Love this line. Also, love Jack being at an utter loss at the Doctor. I just picture this expression: D:

And the "I feel pretty" line is one of the many that made me laugh out loud.

[leighleighla]

you can't be mad or offended at anything Jimmy says or does because it's not like you didn't see it coming.

Exactly! Jimmy doesn't act like this for shock value. He's just like this. :)

Thanks!