got some inspiration from girl genius, NGL

Mar 09, 2011 13:59

So instead of doing homework/studying/etc, I decided to do some more elaboration on my Pirates versus Privates universe, since now that I looked at its story summary, I really didn't give out too much, and since I wrote up that summary, I've come up with more ideas, plots, characters, etc. with that, I'm going to write up character profiles for all of the major and even some minor people in the universe. Enjoy!

Private Minnie Mouse.
Age : 18
Minnie's mother's line have all worked in the N.A.V.Y. (Nautical Air Victorian Youth, a British special arms force that uses young women as soldiers) save for her mother, who became very ill and weak over her lifetime. Minnie has taken it upon herself to uphold the family tradition and 'make up' for what her mother couldn't do. Her home is a simple farm life, with simple people, and she'll do whatever it takes to make her family happy and proud, including marrying Lord Mortimer (ew). Because of this attitude, she often puts her own wants and needs dead last, putting others in front of her and always adhering to their needs. It's thanks to Mickey that she begins to try pleasing herself and pursue what she wants to do in life. Deny all she likes, she reluctantly falls in love with Mickey, though is still determined to capture him.

Though 'private' is in her title, she is actually one of the lower-ranked, because she's always messing up somehow. This isn't to say she's a bad fighter or is bad at her job, she is just far too determined in some things and gets in over her head. Her weapons of choice is her small pistol and saber.

Captain Mickey Mouse.
Age : 20
His mother was a prostitute, a wench, willing to sell herself to any guy that came along. However, when she became pregnant with Mickey, she decided to give up that life and make a better home for her son. She never knew which men she 'worked' with was his father, and Mickey began making up stories to his friends that his father was an angel, or a god, or a demon, whatever he could think of at the moment. When he was a child, a gruesome pirate came to their house and demanded that she sleep with him. When she refused, he killed her right in front of the kid, and nearly killed Mickey too, but he managed to escape. Because of all this, he was determined that when he built his own crew, they wouldn't hurt people on purpose, and only go for treasures, not blood.

Additionally, because of this connection to his mother, he finds himself attracted to Minnie - he wants to coddle and protect her, since he couldn't protect his mother. Thankfully, he realizes that Minnie can take plenty good care of herself, and loves her for who she is. His weapons of choice is an elongated sword and his unbreakable yo-yo, the latter mostly used to tie up people (minnie).

Private Daisy Duck.
Age: 18
Minnie's best friend, the two have known each other for nearly forever. She is in an arranged marriage (most arranged marriages at set at age 18 in this 'verse as it's the most 'ample-baby-making-time' or so society believes) to Donald due to their families, and because of this, she feels she can get away with mistreating him and flirting with other guys. However, when she is tricked into thinking Donald is in love with another woman, her entire world shatters, and she almost quits the NAVY in her despair. Fortunately, Donald proves to her that he was never in love with the other woman, and that no matter how bad he's treated, he'll always love her, arranged or not.From then on, Daisy treats him much, much better. She's a woman who is obsessed with wealth and jewels, but is also one of the ace pilots in the navy.

Concerning the mice, Daisy is on whomever side is most to her advantage at the moment. If she thinks Mickey can be a valuable asset, she's more than willing to trick Minnie into a date with him. However, when she realizes that Minnie is beginning to honestly return his feelings, she outwardly objects to it but inwardly roots on her friend. Her weapon of choice, beside her favorite planes, is a fan that has knives on the other side.

Donald Duck.
Age : 18
A working accountant for his uncle, Donald has loved Daisy since he first met her, and often takes her abuse very well. He doesn't realize when he begins seeing his ex-girlfriend Donna again that Daisy is taking it the wrong way, but when he does, he quickly explains that he only hung out with her as a friend. He has actually applied to the male equivalent of the NAVY, the ARMY (Air Requisitioned Male Youth) several times, but because of his temper, is always rejected. When he can't take the rejection any longer, he secretly joins Darkwing's group of vigilantes, even though that particular group is always rude and arrogant to the NAVY. When Daisy finds out, she is extremely pissed, but he refuses to leave, wanting to be of some help to her and the world. His weapon of choice is a lazer gun.

Private Millicent.
Age : 24
A big-sister figure to Daisy and Minnie, she's usually the one fishing the two out of danger. Though she tries to act tough, more often than not she winds up looking very delicate. She, Clarabelle, Horace, Goofy, and Pete all grew up in the same hometown. As kids, Millie and Goofy agreed to some day get married, before he vanished for over ten years. When he came back into her life as a pirate, she became too-weak willed to hand him over to the NAVY, and so they began to date in private. Minnie finds out, but after some pleading, promises not to tell their secret. As the story goes on, she accidentally gets engaged to a Prince, but with some help from her 'little sisters' and Goofy, manages to stand up for herself and grow self-confidence. Her weapon of choice is a musket.

First Mate Goofy.
Age: 25
His father was a famous pirate, who kidnapped his mother (a princess!) for ransom, but the two wound up falling in love and had a kid together. The father settled in a town to keep his wife and child safe, which is where Goofy met up with Millie, Clarabelle, Horace and Pete. But the kingdom's forces eventually found the family, and Goofy decided to run away to keep his parents safe(since he was 'proof' of their union), changing his name and lying about himself to everyone he met, including Mickey! He actually tries to calm down Mickey's chases for Minnie, but does support their relationship. Eventually he learns his family's kingdom is being ruled by a tyrant, and despite the danger it'll present to his life, reveals who he truly is to everyone and takes his rightful place on the throne. His weapon of choice is a false hook hand.

Private Clarabelle Cow.
Age: 24
The gossip queen of the NAVY, if she hears a story, soon everyone else is going to hear it too. She flirts with almost every guy she meets, though if someone were to actually return her flirts, she just wouldn't know what to do. She's usually bossy to the other girls, but she is a good girl deep down. When she was a child, she accidentally caused a gigantic fire that wound up creating a horrific scar on Horace's back. Due to this tragedy, whenever she's near a particularly large fire, she gets a panic attack, with fits of screaming and crying. She only gets over this fear when, during one adventure, she learns Horace is trapped in a burning building, and she manages to save him. She doesn't like to use weapons, preferring to be physical in fights, with hard punches and tossed kicks.

Horace Horsecollar.
Age: 26
A mechanic for the ARMY, Horace is a gentle giant, usually preferring to stay out of fights.He's been in love with Clarabelle for a long time, but has never gotten the nerve to even hint about his feelings. It's only when he thinks he's dying, trapped in the aforementioned fire, that he kisses her, convinced it'll be his last act... except, oops, he wakes up in a medical wing. From then on, their relationship is full of awkwardness, until Amelia of all people blatantly points out they are CLEARLY in love with each other and convinces them to get together. Since he doesn't fight, he gets no weapon of choice, but if he was tossed in a scuffle, he would use whatever was in his tool box.

Captain Amelia.
Age: Whatever she was in the movie.
Captain of the NAVY, she demands utmost perfection from her girls. She does care, she just chooses not to show it, as that could be taken as weakness. She disciplines Minnie, Daisy, Clarabelle and Millie exceptionally most because they usually fail the most, but she also sees the greatest potential in the rag-tag group. She is also very secretive about her private life, so when she has to take a leave of absence upon becoming pregnant, every single girl in the NAVY is shocked (they didn't even know she was married!) . Her father was head of the ARMY, but committed a transgression, having an affair with a pirate woman, resulting in Amelia having a half-sister named Mirage. She refuses to acknowledge Mirage as family, declaring the NAVY girls are her family, and trying to make up for the mistakes of her father.

Mirage.
Age: One year younger than Amelia.
She and her mother were always scorned, since they were a 'mistake'. Mirage took it upon herself to destroy everything Amelia loves as revenge. She joins up with Magica, tries to seduce Amelia's husband (fails) , tries to seduce Mickey (REALLY fails), and tries to kill Minnie (nearly succeeded, if Amelia didn't come in to save the day). She becomes obsessed with revenge, and Magica gets annoyed as this continues to get in the way of her plans. So eventually Magica tricks Mirage into getting captured by the NAVY and being sent to jail once and for all. Betrayed, Mirage breaks out, and tells the pirates of Magica's real plans, which will be revealed in her profile.

Lord Mortimer Rodawn.
Age: 20.
Minnie's fiance, he is a snooty aristocrat who believes fighting should be left to the men. Though he looks rich and is always buying some new mansion or opera house, the truth is his money is dwindling, and his investors are leaving him. He is marrying Minnie to try and salvage some money and 'prove' to his investors that he can be trusted. As the story progresses, he begins to treat Minnie as less of a person and more as another treasure he's bought. Once he understands Mickey's intentions, he publicly issues a reward for his capture, even though at that time he would have no way to pay it. The wedding day is when it is finally revealed about his real reason for marrying her and how flat-out broke he is.

Lord Oswald.
Age: 20
Another snooty aristocrat, he has a long standing grudge against Mickey, and is determined to have his revenge. Mickey has stolen from several of his parties, destroyed some of his boats, and essentially made Oswald look like a coward and a fool. Mickey, unfortunately... doesn't remember any of this - he does these kinds of things to everyone, after all. When Oswald learns of Mickey's feelings for Minnie, he decided to marry Minnie as a form of revenge, despite Minnie saying she has absolutely no interest in either of them. Oswald only gives up when he meets Hortensia, and wants to marry her instead. Hilariously, he goes about 'courting' her the same way Mickey 'courts' Minnie, and refuses to believe he is anything like Mickey.

Eventually, in order to be with Hortensia, he gives up his aristocracy and becomes a pirate - saying he'll be a much better one than Mickey, of course.

Hortensia.
Age: 19
During Mickey's childhood, he took Hortensia under his wing and showed her the best ways to deceive and steal, and they became a bloodless union of brother and sister. But in the present, when she gets a letter from him saying he's found the woman he's going to marry, Hortensia disguises herself as a man to join his ship to try and find out about this woman and make sure she's good enough for her 'brother'. Her cover gets blown by Oswald, but she refuses to leave Mickey's ship, becoming a 'real' pirate. She treats Oswald's sudden infatuation much like Minnie did with Mickey's - WHAT NO OH GOD WHY. But she comes to respect Minnie and deems her worthy of being her brother's bride. As for Oswald, she says she'll marry him only if he does various impossible tasks, and she continues getting surprised as he accomplishes each one. Her weapon of choice are small knives like cat-claws.

Lady Magica DeSpell
Age: 40
On the surface, she is a long-time business partner of Scrooge, always donating charity money to the NAVY, and collecting ancient artifacts as a hobby. But in private, she has a hand in the black market, and often orders pirates to steal things for her. Her real goal is to find old robot warriors and then upgrade them in order to make them invincible and take over the world. She's a ruthless woman who will quickly get rid of people she deems useless or get in her way, like getting Mirage arrested or trying to kill Mickey when she's convinced he would disobey orders if it meant being with Minnie. Her 'relationship' with Scrooge is both amorous and ambiguous, as in one moment she may flirt up a storm with him, and then in the next wish him dead right to his face. Her weapon of choice is a staff, with a mystical hypnotizing gem on the top.

Lord Scrooge McDuck.
Age: god only knows. *smacked*
Though he's worked long with Amelia and often entrusted her and the NAVY to protect his wealth, once he comes across the ragtag group of failures (Minnie,Daisy,Millie,Clara) he begins hiring Darkwing's vigilante group as well. He's rather oblivious to Donald being a member of it, and really only cares that Donald marries Daisy as soon as possible so he can get even richer by their union. Halfway through the story, he is kidnapped, though no one knows by whom and where he is. Near the end it is revealed that Magica hypnotized him into staying with her at her mansion as a slave and a lover, and the spell over him is only broken when Minnie destroys her staff. After the ordeal, he tells Donald that he will no longer force him into the marriage with Daisy and that the boy can do as he pleases. Of course, Donald pleases to marry Daisy anyway!

Darkwing Duck/Drake Mallard
Age: 30
Leader of the Justice Ducks, a vigilante group that fights pirates, he has very little respect for the ARMY and NAVY, believing they only obey the aristocrats and don't seek justice for the less wealthy. Because of this, he usually butts heads with Amelia over whose group is better. Though his main weapon is a gas gun, he also uses a steam-powered motorcycle to fly through the skies. This motorcycle is stolen twice, first by Mickey and then by Minnie (though the latter promised to return it... except she destroyed it by accident.)

One-Eyed-Pete
Age: 27
A crewmate of Mickey, he's always been jealous of his superior, since not only is Mickey stronger, faster, and smarter than him, Pete hates having to obey someone much younger than he is. Eventually he tries to declare mutiny on the captain, but it turns out he's the only man on board who doesn't like Mickey. So Pete leaves and tries to form his own crew, but it doesn't exactly pan out. When Minnie shows up, he falls for her too, (bringing her number of suitors up to 4 at this point!) and wants to 'steal' her from the captain.

Other Notes:

The 'world' of this verse is divided up into four land masses, being four kingdoms - North, South, East, West. Goofy's family is the Kingdom of the West. Other 'famous' female disney figures are also in the NAVY and may show up from time to time,such as Fawn Deer and Gadget. The Disney Princesses are past NAVY captains/admirals/what have you and are what every NAVY girl strives to be.

Detailed Scenes In My Head (in no particular order):
  • Minnie going to Millie for advice about what to do about Mickey, and catches Millie in a very... 'compromising' position with Goofy, thus revealing their relationship.
  • Minnie forced to disguise herself as a harem-girl of sorts in order to distract guys at a bar while the other girls sneak in and try to catch pirates. Of course, Mickey so happens to be at that bar, and takes full advantage of what's going on, much to Minnie's chagrin.
  • A wild chase in an exotic jungle, with Minnie trying to find a lost ruby while all four of her suitors are going after her and trying to get rid of the competition amongst them.
  • Daisy standing in the rain as she sees what she thinks to be Donna and Donald in a passionate embrace.
  • Minnie having to distract Mickey from signaling to his men to capture a ship by 'returning' his affections at last. He falls hard for the trick, and even after he realizes he's been deceived, he just loves her all the more for it.
  • Daisy coercing Mickey to help her dig for info about Donna by paying him off with photographs of Minnie.
  • Mortimer buying a supposedly haunted house where a man supposedly killed his entire staff when his bride died before the wedding day. When Mortimer and Minnie sleep over, Mickey sneaks over to make sure Mortimer doesn't do anything to Minnie during the night (because HE wants to, darnit) and what ensues are exaggerating hauntings and scare tactics. It gets revealed that one of the surviving servants has been using holograms and robots to scare people away, as he wants to preserve the mansion in memory of the bride, who he loved and accidentally killed.
  • Darkwing and Minnie wind up trapped in an elaborate maze by Megavolt, who is working with Mickey and Morgana McCawber(a black market dealer) . But Mickey and Morgana become stupidly convinced that Darkwing is trying to seduce Minnie/Minnie is trying to seduce Darkwing (and of course the two WANT NOTHING TO DO WITH EACH OTHER) and Mick and Morg begin using Megavolt's contraptions to try and get rid of the person who 'dares to steal their beloved'. Megavolt eventually gets sick of this nonsense and tries to kill all four of them, but is defeated.
  • Minnie is trapped in a device that lets her live a 'perfect life' in a dream, trapped by a reluctant Morgana and her partner Nodoff. But Minnie actually breaks free of the device when she realizes the life is a lie - her so-called perfect life doesn't have Mickey in it, so it's not perfect.
  • The final show-down is between Magica and Minnie, the latter battered, beaten and bleeding but refusing to give up, and keeps saying the oath police take when bringing in a suspect - the whole  "You have the right to remain silent, anything you say etc etc" - despite being shot and hit at. Though Magica finally gets defeated, her robots are still on the rampage, and can only be stopped by going inside a gigantic generator and making it self destruct. She and Mickey are the only ones small enough to get inside, so they have to go inside and set it off, just barely making it out with their lives.
  • Daisy goes to wake up Minnie, and finds out Mickey has... 'slept over'. Minnie has to tackle her friend down in order to keep her from telling the others.  ("It was nothing! Just... Just a one-night mistake!" "One-night and six times..." "MICKEY SHUT UP.")
I'm probably forgetting something or other, but it was fun to type.

darkwing duck, milicent, pirates versus privates, mirage, donald, mickey, pete, daisy, mortimer, magica, horace, goofy, oswald, scrooge, minnie, morgana, disney, clarabelle

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