Lost Fic for Five Acts started by toestastegood

[greedyslayer]

Title: ouroborus or the snake that devours its own tail
Character(s)/Pairing(s): sorta Jacob/Richard/Esau triangle
Summary: AU. Jacob and Esau fight over Richard in any time period.
Notes: Originally for aurilly. Some grammar and logic edits.

Comments

[ohioala19]

Wow, I just adored these fics. Both of them, in fact I can't quite decide which I like best! In the first I just love how young esau and jacob are already fighting over richard and richard's thoughts as he internally is freaking out a bit. The second one is so aborable, I just love little Issac, poor guy getting called guyliner too, I loved how James was watching over him and being like a dad, and I love how happy richard was delivering the baby even though he didn't know it was his. Oh and that story of Isaac trying to cut off his eyelashes was just precious!

[ohioala19]

PS Please tell me your going to write more! Especially of the one with baby Isaac I want to know what happens next! Or at least more fill ins over the years. Or heck any more story with Richard in it would be awesome :) THere's simply not enough!

[greedyslayer]

Richard does need more fic.

I have a ridiculous affection for OC Isaac who's actually based on another character from a different fandom, and would like to do more with him and how he connects to the canon cast.

[tia_no_one]

YAY little Isaac! I can't even tell you how excited I was to see this spinoff to Just My Luck, and it was every bit as fabulous as the original.

[greedyslayer]

Thanks! :D The order's kinda messed up for "Just My Luck" now, but maybe I should just sorta do connected one-shots from now on?

It was nice returning to that 'verse and finally moving it forward some.

Ohman, I love OC Isaac like said above, he's actually based on one of my favorite characters from a different fandom. I have plans for him that I'd like to post sometime.

[anonymous]

Really liked these. Poor Richard. BTW, I'm guessing you read Nestor's comments about trying to cut his own eyelashes when he was a little kid because of the teasing he got. Liked the way you incorporated that into your story.

[greedyslayer]

Thank you. :)

Poor Richard. I take a guilty pleasure in torturing my favorites.

BTW, I'm guessing you read Nestor's comments about trying to cut his own eyelashes when he was a little kid because of the teasing he got. Liked the way you incorporated that into your story.

Yep, it's really cool you got that. I know I've seen his little story about that before, and I've been wanting to link and explain that reference here, but I haven't had much luck finding it. Do you have a link to it?

[thorongirl]

Oh, you like tormenting your favorite characters in your stories too? It's not just me. Although I have doubts I'll ever figure Live Journal out enough to do much posting. FF.Net is more my speed...Anyway, poor Nestor. Guess being rich, handsome, brilliant, and all around superlative eases the pain of teasing somewhat. (She said with a smile). At least I hope so. Here's the link you asked for BTW: http://www.premiumhollywood.com/2009/01/28/once-more-for-the-record-nestor-carbonell-does-not-wear-eye-make-up/

Sorry it took so long to get back to you. I've read a lot of your stories but am afraid I haven't commented before now. Of course, I really don't remember whether I have or not.

[thorongirl]

Forgot to sign in before. BTW, loved the tug of war, as it were, between Jacob and MIB, over Richard. Love your stories.