Hidden Truths - Part 3/3

Feb 02, 2008 23:06

Title: Hidden Truths (Part 3 of 3)
Team Name: Spy for the Order.
Word Count: 100 x 6
Rating: PG-13... for one naughty word XD
Challenge: Behind Closed Doors Challenge
Characters: Hermione/Severus, Ron, Harry, Remus.
Authors Notes: This kept growing and growing and... I'm actually not that happy with it (way too sappy, and random for me, personally ( Read more... )

lux_astraea, behind closed doors challenge

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sbrande February 3 2008, 00:25:37 UTC
Very nicely done. especially the ending :) What do you mean by sort of? Do I forsee some more of this drabble in the near future?

Love Sonia :)

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lux_astraea February 14 2008, 17:12:01 UTC
Sort of as in I have more written but it's not leading anywhere. I want to leave it for a while and see how it goes.

The muse is impatient like that.

:)

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vintagejgc February 3 2008, 05:29:09 UTC
Very honest reactions from the boys, great set!
=)

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lux_astraea February 14 2008, 17:14:25 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked them! ♥

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septentrion1970 February 3 2008, 10:36:41 UTC
Nice ending.

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lux_astraea February 14 2008, 17:15:21 UTC
Hehe. Thanks.

Although to be completely honest, there is more. I haven't finished it because it's not going anywhere and I don't have the time to see where it will at the moment. I think stopping it where I did works, though. :)

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lux_astraea February 14 2008, 17:16:05 UTC
Hee, thanks! Glad you liked! :)

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writermerrin February 3 2008, 12:37:17 UTC
Oh, cute! The vulnerability between the two of them is absolutely precious.

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lux_astraea February 14 2008, 17:16:52 UTC
Aww thank you! I tried to show that. Even though they put on a united front in front of others so to speak there is still the worry between them. :)

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