The Coldest Summer, VI

Dec 09, 2007 14:22

Title: The Coldest Summer
Team: Spy for the Order
Word Count: 10x100
Rating: PG-13
Challenge: Coldest Winter
Characters: Hermione, Severus
A/N: Well, hopefully this isn't quite as frustrating as the previous set!
Previous sets: part I, part II , part III, part IV, part VSnape gave her a look she couldn’t quite decipher ( Read more... )

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a_bees_buzz December 9 2007, 12:52:50 UTC
Your lips were nearly frozen. I needed to warm them up before applying the ointment.

And slipping her the tongue? That was necessary too? Yeah, right.

When I thought I might be dying - when I asked Potter to look at me - I don’t know how, but it finally made it possible for me to let go. To consider the debt paid

Important plot point, that. It's not about romantic love at this point in his life, but about a debt. That works very well.

I'm so glad he's finally getting to the point, though the part about threatening her was a little worrying. Very clever of you to find a way to make the cold work for them!

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kribu December 9 2007, 13:48:17 UTC
Of course it was necessary. Her mouth needed to be moistened, too! *winks*

I figured he wouldn't just start spilling everything without at least some sort of effort to remind her that he's still someone to reckon with. We don't know how much of it he actually meant though!

I'm glad he's finally getting to the point, too. Took him long enough!

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firefly124 December 9 2007, 12:54:14 UTC
‘I most certainly did not. Your lips were nearly frozen. I needed to warm them up before applying the ointment.’

Yes, yes, just keep telling yourself that, Severus. *g*

Lovely!!

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kribu December 9 2007, 13:51:15 UTC
He probably figured it would work better than "Well, yeah, I fancied a snog right now". ;-)

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dickgloucester December 9 2007, 14:12:36 UTC
*snerfle*

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kribu December 9 2007, 13:52:37 UTC
It might be a bit tricky to get to those other parts without freezing completely in the upcoming blizzard! :-D Although of course as an accomplished wizard, who knows... ;-)

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kribu December 9 2007, 13:53:55 UTC
Good, it was supposed to come as a surprise! ;-) *is a bit evil*

Thanks! And hmm... I might still need it for myself. We'll see though!

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septentrion1970 December 9 2007, 13:51:27 UTC
Ah, the tale is progressing.

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kribu December 9 2007, 13:54:11 UTC
Indeed - about time, too!

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