Like everything else you write, I loved every bit of this chapter. I saved your update for last and read it twice before I felt my brain was even able to function well enough to comment. I loved the Van/Jake & Eric/Teri intereaction.
What I really am enjoying is how intense the connection between Van and Eric is. They just can't stay away from each other and when they are around each other that isn't enough they need to touch, then that becomes not enough. It is just wonderful how you write their intensity.
Eric’s hand slid across Van’s torso, another kiss against his neck, and his hand tucking down underneath Van’s back. “No, it’s you, you make me want…everything,” he murmured. He felt like there was more to say, but his eyes felt heavy.
“I want it too,” Van whispered, before sleep claimed him as well.
I third this motion, I want everything from them too! You do AMAZING at the NC-17. You can only get better w/ practice (just sayin) LOL Seriously though, it was very HOT and loving all at the same time. I am so sad that there are only 2 more chapters. Feel free to extend it. :)
Oh, thank you so very much. The Van/Jake and Terri/Eric stuff was probably written for cherimola and I'm glad you liked it. The guys are pretty intense, aren't they? I liked what you said, they can't seem to get enough of each other that's for sure. And thank you for what you said about the NC-17 stuff. We might see more. No plans for an extension at the moment, but I'm glad you're enjoying the ride. ~Ali
What I really am enjoying is how intense the connection between Van and Eric is. They just can't stay away from each other and when they are around each other that isn't enough they need to touch, then that becomes not enough. It is just wonderful how you write their intensity.
Eric’s hand slid across Van’s torso, another kiss against his neck, and his hand tucking down underneath Van’s back. “No, it’s you, you make me want…everything,” he murmured. He felt like there was more to say, but his eyes felt heavy.
“I want it too,” Van whispered, before sleep claimed him as well.
I third this motion, I want everything from them too! You do AMAZING at the NC-17. You can only get better w/ practice (just sayin) LOL Seriously though, it was very HOT and loving all at the same time. I am so sad that there are only 2 more chapters. Feel free to extend it. :)
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