very very belated gift for super_kc

Aug 27, 2007 20:44

One month ago *sheesh* *facepalms*  Queen
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fic, lost, lost fic: ben

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munibunny August 28 2007, 01:25:27 UTC
Wow! This is really good! :D

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gottalovev August 28 2007, 13:46:23 UTC
thank you sweetie! :) ♥

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elliotsmelliot August 28 2007, 01:40:35 UTC
This is a nice interpretation of a number of questions. I liked how Ben's maturity, psychologically I mean, is presented as somewhat childish.

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gottalovev August 28 2007, 13:48:10 UTC
thank you! I really feel like Ben is a bit like a petulent child sometimes, especially his attitude vs Locke and "the island likes me better than you"... happy that worked for you too!

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crickets August 28 2007, 04:21:34 UTC
Oh man! I feel so much like I don't deserve this. But I will thank you none the less! And what a great belated present it is! You somehow managed to convey the selfishness of Ben here along with the mystery of Richard. And the question of why he's like that. Is it possibly a side-effect (gift) from the island? Etc. etc.

Thank you!

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gottalovev August 28 2007, 13:50:44 UTC
you totally deserve it babe, and even more! not your fault I went frolicking on your day...

I am glad that what i did pleased you, it was a challenge because I've never tried to go into Ben's head before. I am sure he would resent Richard if he was that special and not him.

*smooch*

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alemyrddin August 28 2007, 07:55:08 UTC
mmm... intriguing.
I am still not sure if Richard not ageing is just a case of bad make-up or has something to do with the island.
But Ben looking for hair dye? lol!
:)

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gottalovev August 28 2007, 13:54:10 UTC
you know what? I am convinced that the guy in the jungle that Ben met as a kid is not the same as the modern day Richard... his father or something like that. But I tried to play with the idea of an ever young Richard that seems quite popular and see what it would do to Ben.

now about the hair dye... I so had to refrain to write "look for hair dye and eyeliner"... LOL! would have thrown the whole thing off course, but I thought about it very very hard!

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siluria August 28 2007, 19:23:00 UTC
Richard didn't age
Finally someone noticed ;) I can't tell you how happy this fic makes me, simply because you played on something I've wanted to read about for a while, and because you hit Ben's response perfectly.

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gottalovev August 29 2007, 14:31:02 UTC
tee hee! yeah, someone noticed finally! I am happy this little fic explored an interesting theme for you! and thanks so much, first time writing Ben, I was a bit nervous! ♥

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