rooftop

Apr 11, 2015 02:00

title: rooftop
pairing: jackson/jr
rating: nc-17
summary: every day, they meet on the rooftop of their high school.
notes: for lahdeedah000 :)

Jinyoung had inexplicably disliked Jackson the moment he laid eyes on him. )

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noisestorms April 10 2015, 20:58:06 UTC
OMFG I STARTED FLAILING WHEN I SAW YOU POSTED FICS!!!!!

i love how you could tell jackson was kind of melting jinyoung's cold exterior through the whole fic, jinyoung realizing maybe jackson doesn't hate him? AND THEN IT ENDED WITH THEM GRINDING AGAINST EACH OTHER I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU DID THAT. omfg everything you write is beautiful even the porn let me just cry rn

"Not anymore."

SCREAMS SOME MORE

ofc this is fuckin wonderful just like u~

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gotchick April 11 2015, 15:15:16 UTC
OMFG I STARTED FLAILING WHEN I SAW YOU COMMENTED T_T yOU'RE SO SWEET im really touched that you're always so excited to read my fics and take the time to comment immediately you're too amazing to be real gdi how do you even exist?!?!?

hahaha i love cold!tsundere!jinyoung and love-hate!jinson dkjfkjg im so pleased you liked this AU and how i portrayed their dynamic bc this is my first time writing jinson although i ship them like burning ;u; yess im glad you could feel how jinyoung's feelings towards jackson were changing :3 LOL GRINDING I CAN'T BELIEVE IT EITHER IM SORRY FOR TORTURING YOU WITH MY GROSSSMUT JINSON :B weeping that you think its beautiful and not feeling awkward with this conversation at all B)

screams ty for quoting the last line im thrilled you liked it hehe :D

YOU are fucking amazing omg what did i do to deserve you T.T thank you so much for always reading and taking the time to leave me such a gorgeous, lovely comment my boo!!! ♥♥♥

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/hit by a brick saranghey_you April 11 2015, 05:48:29 UTC
jaebong-hyung, how could you?

you took my most disliked got-otp & completely flipped the game for me!!!!

gdi!!! wait for me, i'm only halfway through

i'll be back.

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thats not a brick its my lips gotchick April 12 2015, 15:11:16 UTC
YOUR PRETTY JJP ICON EEE *u*

hehehe im sorry dongsaengie ^^;;; LOL idk jinson was your most disliked otp xD but im so touched that you read this for me despite that you didn't have to bb!! ;__; i'll be happy if this could give you even a tiny jinson feels but you don't have to come back and comment anymore!! :D you've already spent enough time showering me with lovely comments T.T its enough for me to know that you read it, thank you so much for taking the time to read both ficlets bb :)) you're always so supportive about everything i write ♥

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bloodyrose2442 April 11 2015, 08:38:28 UTC
yayyyyy! not one but two fics from you- what a blessing.

as the commenter before me said- these otps aren't really all that popular and yeah, i myself am not that big of a fan, but a good fanfic is a good fanfic no matter the pairing. good written fics have made me ships things i'd thought i'd never ship lol.

the markbum reminded me a little bit of another one of your stories with the whole "fragments from different times" element, and i really enjoyed it. sort of had the feeling jackson and jinyoung would end up together there and for a second i was even wondering if "rooftop" would be centering around their story and stuff. but i certainly wasn't dissapointed when the fic threw is in a completly different environment- i liked your jinyoung here a lot. i mean he seems like a really sweet boy, but really prideful at the same time in real life as well. it's refreshing seeing him presented in a more negative light for once. and jackson is a big dork no matter how you look at it lol.

thanks for sharing these stories with us ♥

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gotchick April 12 2015, 15:14:16 UTC
omg hello bb!! ;~; i hope you've been doing well in the weeks since we last spoke :) CRIES thank you so much for reading both ficlets, it means especially much to me knowing that they're not pairings you ship ♥ hahaha you're so sweet to say its a blessing yess congrats me for managing to write shortfic for once! :3 ( ... )

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lahdeedah000 April 11 2015, 19:45:47 UTC
THIS IS FOR ME?!!?!?!?!????????!

SCREAMS BECAUSE I'VE BEEN OUT OF TOWN AND THIS IS THE FIRST THING I COME BACK TO???????? OMG OMG OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
FREAKING OUT FREAKING OUT FREAKING OUT CLUTCHING MY PILLOW AND SCREAMING INTO IT AND I HAVEN'T EVEN READ IT YET OMGGGGGGGG

OK BRB GONNA READ AND I'LL SPAZZ MORE GAHHHHHHH

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lahdeedah000 April 11 2015, 20:15:10 UTC
“Jackson is about as subtle as an atomic bomb” <<<<<< pretty much the most accurate description of Jackson lmaoooo and Jinyoung’s entire scornful analysis of Jackson and his qualities is making me die I can’t omg. How he’s jealous and kinda acknowledges it and thus avoids him but also his feeling of superiority nonetheless XDDD all his thoughts are just so JINYOUNG asdfawdfsdff

YESSSSSSSSSSSS jinyoung’s moodiness >.< you’re so freaking SPOT ON with characterization I cry and asdlkfjawoeifjd you know that’s the way to my heart because CHARACTERIZATION HITS ME IN THE EVERYTHING ;A; his whole mini-existential crisis was totally relatable, I think we all feel dispensible at some point in our life and idk why those two sentences just resonated so much OTL IGNORE ME I’M A SPAZZ ( ... )

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lahdeedah000 April 11 2015, 20:16:11 UTC
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(interlude because you know how I am with smut but I skimmed it anyways because I thought it would be essential to plot/character development and it was and very well done but >///////<)
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lahdeedah000 April 11 2015, 20:24:03 UTC
ANYWAYS OMG AFTERMATH alsdkjfoaiwjfd thank you so much asldkjfaowi the awkwardness and uncertainty afterwards is just so heartbreaking but realistic but heartbreaking LIKE MY HEART ;_;
BUT THEN BUT THEN “But then Jackson raises his eyes in disbelief, fixing them on Jinyoung as they bore into him, the emotions playing like a movie across their expressive irises -- surprise, vulnerability, then breathtaking, exhilarating happiness, and Jinyoung realizes why when he hears the two simple words he's saying, words that change everything. "Not anymore.””

/SCREAMS HALLELUJAH AND RUNS OFF INTO THE SUNSET CRYING BECAUSE THAT’S WHAT I DO BEST OWEJAF;DSILKJAWOEGHAO;ISDJFAW;OEILSJFDKAOW;IEJSDKF

I SHOULD SAY MORE BUT I HAVE NO MORE WORDS LEFT I CAN’T I’M DONE THANK YOU SO MUCH I LOVE YOU THE WORLD NEEDS MORE JINSON AND I LOVE YOU AND I DON’T KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAY BUT IMMA KEEP ABUSING CAPS LOCK I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU <333333333333333

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kashchanocchi April 12 2015, 00:47:17 UTC
omfg *n* well done! <3

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gotchick April 14 2015, 13:57:52 UTC
aww im so happy you enjoyed thats such a great compliment! :)
thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave me such a sweet comment ♥

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