Ok so this took longer than expected!! but i am back!!
just when i thought the drama could be possibly maybe over, why did i even think that ahaha, you give my poor little heart a fright. mark going back to LA?? (he's not thank goodness) jaebum definitely going to Korea for uni (he is whyyyyyy) but i totally understood why jackson jumped to conclusions because he's still so uncertain about his relationship with mark which is why i really appreciated the apology scene because they're finally communicating!!
also yay apology scene!! i think mark's hesitation to kiss jackson because of his previous actions make a lot of sense and the scene felt very natural and sincere. it was very sweet and it made me happy :3
and then the fluff continues with mark's birthdays and cute selfies. i think it was so cute that jackson went all out for mark's present. and how mark went to the fencing club to tell jackson's teammates to not mess with him and then jackson told everyone mark is his boyfriend. all of it made me so happy and it's nice to see the relationship going smoothly lol less drama for my poor heart :P but then you hit me with the nostalgia feels and how the club will never be the same again because mark and jaebum are graduating soon and jackson thinking of those memories and how the club changed his high school experience and relationships ;____; it reminds me of my memories of high school and how reminiscing is so bittersweet.
mark and jackson on the beach.... mark captured my thoughts exactly: mark sighs, sounding long-suffering. "jia-er," he says patiently. "can we just... skip the awkwardness for once?" i might have died laughing because i had the same thought ahaha
and finally the jaebum and jinyoung surprise at the end!! ahhhhhhhhh i was very surprised but i thought it was so sweet and cute. how jaebum noticed jinyoung since junior high ;_______; crying forever.
i'm sorry my comment isn't as detailed or articulate as my last ones, and how its mostly a play by play of my feelings since this chapter was a rollercoaster. BUT that means you made a reader feel a lot of different emotions with your writing!! heads up i'll probably be very sad next week because its the end nooooo!! but i am still looking forward to the last chapter and i'm interested in seeing how this all ends!! thank you for another wonderful update!
oh gosh im sorry lol i was gonna reply your first comment to tell you that you didn't have to come back with a longer, more detailed one bc as i always say just knowing that you took the time to read this update again is more than enough for me :') but before i could reply, you had already came back to leave me your second lengthy, mindblowing comment gosh ;__; honestly i would have been incredibly grateful and content already with just one line of "i liked this" from you!! :") but thank you as always for really taking the time to analyze this chapter so in depth and painstakingly type down your thoughts on every plot point for me ;u; its unfailingly so illuminating, entertaining and encouraging to read what you think of every aspect of the fic TT awww im flattered that this update could motivate and excite you, and you even took the trouble to drop a comment immediately when you saw it, even though you were busy with classes and homework! i hope you managed to get all that homework done ;)
LOL poor little heart you're so cute hehe im sorry for the fright /strokes ur heart/ ahaha that was an idea a friend (actually the one i dedicated this fic to xD) suggested on the previous chapter and i thought it would make a good plot point and it did! :3 yup i intended jaebum to go back to korea for college all along and so took the chance to incorporate it here :( yess i think that was the final misunderstanding between them which was quickly and neatly resolved with the apology which also settled the previous incident and i think it was an important talk they needed to progress their relationship to the next, more secure level :) im glad you felt they started communicating healthily after that and the confusion was put to rest hehe. aww i really appreciate your wise advice to me in the last chapter to include the apology scene, i think it was something a lot of readers, myself included, needed to warm up to mark and accept him as good enough for jackson again :')
cries im so pleased you felt it was "very natural and sincere" and sweet and made you happy!! n_n yup i thought it would be smooth to link it to the scene of him thinking mark was going abroad with some leading up to the apology as opposed to it coming out of nowhere haha. im really glad it made you happy and you felt that mark had redeemed himself for his previous actions :)))
hurhur im thrilled you thought it was still fluffy, even though there was a bit of drama and i got a little sappy there with the reminiscing lmao. i can't resist inserting multiple selfie scenes haha since its like their tradition in this au :p aawww im super happy you thought markson going all out and being self-sacrificing for each other was cute!! yess i love writing about them just being silly and dorky and in love and i hope everyone reading this fic will feel happy, so im glad you felt i accomplished my mission :D HAHAHA aww im very flattered that you were so emotionally impacted by the nostalgia and felt bittersweet and reminded of your HS days but i hope it didn't make you too sad! ;;
LMFAO im amused you "might have died laughing" at that part bc that was really me speaking tbh i was about to write another scene of them getting awkward and confused for the zillionth time after intimacy... then was like "screw that im tired of this" LOL
haha im delighted you liked the jjp plot twist as well, and that it took you by surprise! :) just like mark's feelings from the beginning, it was a revelation i intended to make from the start but i wasn't sure if it would be convincing :) im elated you found it sweet and cute and yes i think its so romantic when jjp mutually like and admire each other but aren't aware of it ;u;
omgg pls don't apologize what are you talking about this is like the most detailed and articulate comment you've left me?? i mean all your comments are awesome but this is definitely the longest one and i really appreciate the amount of time it must've taken you to type out ;A; hahaha play by play comments are my favourite ngl and you really went in with this one, i had such fun and smiled so hugely reading all your feelings and opinions about the various scenes ;__; thank you for all your meaningful and perceptive observations! "made a reader feel a lot of different emotions" is such a wonderful compliment huhu
d'aww don't be sad im incredibly flattered that you like this fic so much you're sad that its ending! :'( but thank you for being so interested and enthusiastic to see how this ends :)) you're very welcome, thank YOU so much for taking the time to read this so carefully and leaving me such a glorious, fantastic and thoughtful comment, and supporting this au so warmly!!! i love you ♥
just when i thought the drama could be possibly maybe over, why did i even think that ahaha, you give my poor little heart a fright. mark going back to LA?? (he's not thank goodness) jaebum definitely going to Korea for uni (he is whyyyyyy) but i totally understood why jackson jumped to conclusions because he's still so uncertain about his relationship with mark which is why i really appreciated the apology scene because they're finally communicating!!
also yay apology scene!! i think mark's hesitation to kiss jackson because of his previous actions make a lot of sense and the scene felt very natural and sincere. it was very sweet and it made me happy :3
and then the fluff continues with mark's birthdays and cute selfies. i think it was so cute that jackson went all out for mark's present. and how mark went to the fencing club to tell jackson's teammates to not mess with him and then jackson told everyone mark is his boyfriend. all of it made me so happy and it's nice to see the relationship going smoothly lol less drama for my poor heart :P but then you hit me with the nostalgia feels and how the club will never be the same again because mark and jaebum are graduating soon and jackson thinking of those memories and how the club changed his high school experience and relationships ;____; it reminds me of my memories of high school and how reminiscing is so bittersweet.
mark and jackson on the beach.... mark captured my thoughts exactly:
mark sighs, sounding long-suffering. "jia-er," he says patiently. "can we just... skip the awkwardness for once?" i might have died laughing because i had the same thought ahaha
and finally the jaebum and jinyoung surprise at the end!! ahhhhhhhhh i was very surprised but i thought it was so sweet and cute. how jaebum noticed jinyoung since junior high ;_______; crying forever.
i'm sorry my comment isn't as detailed or articulate as my last ones, and how its mostly a play by play of my feelings since this chapter was a rollercoaster. BUT that means you made a reader feel a lot of different emotions with your writing!! heads up i'll probably be very sad next week because its the end nooooo!! but i am still looking forward to the last chapter and i'm interested in seeing how this all ends!! thank you for another wonderful update!
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LOL poor little heart you're so cute hehe im sorry for the fright /strokes ur heart/ ahaha that was an idea a friend (actually the one i dedicated this fic to xD) suggested on the previous chapter and i thought it would make a good plot point and it did! :3 yup i intended jaebum to go back to korea for college all along and so took the chance to incorporate it here :( yess i think that was the final misunderstanding between them which was quickly and neatly resolved with the apology which also settled the previous incident and i think it was an important talk they needed to progress their relationship to the next, more secure level :) im glad you felt they started communicating healthily after that and the confusion was put to rest hehe. aww i really appreciate your wise advice to me in the last chapter to include the apology scene, i think it was something a lot of readers, myself included, needed to warm up to mark and accept him as good enough for jackson again :')
cries im so pleased you felt it was "very natural and sincere" and sweet and made you happy!! n_n yup i thought it would be smooth to link it to the scene of him thinking mark was going abroad with some leading up to the apology as opposed to it coming out of nowhere haha. im really glad it made you happy and you felt that mark had redeemed himself for his previous actions :)))
hurhur im thrilled you thought it was still fluffy, even though there was a bit of drama and i got a little sappy there with the reminiscing lmao. i can't resist inserting multiple selfie scenes haha since its like their tradition in this au :p aawww im super happy you thought markson going all out and being self-sacrificing for each other was cute!! yess i love writing about them just being silly and dorky and in love and i hope everyone reading this fic will feel happy, so im glad you felt i accomplished my mission :D HAHAHA aww im very flattered that you were so emotionally impacted by the nostalgia and felt bittersweet and reminded of your HS days but i hope it didn't make you too sad! ;;
LMFAO im amused you "might have died laughing" at that part bc that was really me speaking tbh i was about to write another scene of them getting awkward and confused for the zillionth time after intimacy... then was like "screw that im tired of this" LOL
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omgg pls don't apologize what are you talking about this is like the most detailed and articulate comment you've left me?? i mean all your comments are awesome but this is definitely the longest one and i really appreciate the amount of time it must've taken you to type out ;A; hahaha play by play comments are my favourite ngl and you really went in with this one, i had such fun and smiled so hugely reading all your feelings and opinions about the various scenes ;__; thank you for all your meaningful and perceptive observations! "made a reader feel a lot of different emotions" is such a wonderful compliment huhu
d'aww don't be sad im incredibly flattered that you like this fic so much you're sad that its ending! :'( but thank you for being so interested and enthusiastic to see how this ends :)) you're very welcome, thank YOU so much for taking the time to read this so carefully and leaving me such a glorious, fantastic and thoughtful comment, and supporting this au so warmly!!! i love you ♥
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