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Not Even A Fraction 2; Jonghyun/Onew

Oct 18, 2010 23:07

Title: Not Even A Fraction
Author goobers
Rating: PG-13
Chapter: 2 / ?
Pairing/Focus: Jonghyun / Onew ; Onew / Key
Summary: Onew has decided that he wants a girlfriend! So he decides to ask advice from his classmate Jonghyun. Things start off simple enough until their emotions suddenly change. What happens when Onew no longer wants a girlfriend, but ( Read more... )

pairing: jonghyun/onew, rating: pg-13

Comments 18

crazyoverbishie October 19 2010, 05:23:10 UTC

SPOT!!!!!!!!!!!!

*reads*

Wow! gooberso1 October 19 2010, 05:26:28 UTC

YAY! YOU ARE TOO FAST! OH OH OH!

Ohhh, Do you want me to spot you for the next chapter? ;)

Re: Wow! crazyoverbishie October 19 2010, 06:13:08 UTC

ahahahaha...not really^^

do you really have to ask???
that's not necessary but of course ill be super happy for it...but only if you would...^^

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Feeling eyes boring into him, Kibum turned those narrow eyes straight at Jinki. Instead of staring straight at the nervous nerd, he was staring into the soul of the oldest of the three.
I seriously think that Key actually seeing how hot Onew can be...XD

With that comment, Key moved forward to poke Jinki‘s cheek lightly with his finger.
idky but i found it cute...XXDD

whoaaa...congrats!! Finally Jinki could have Jonghyun as his mentor and Key as his stylist..XD
Key is just his diva-self...and Jonghyun just being cute as usual for me..XD
this is getting interesting...i kinda hope for slight OnJongKey here..XD
but i wanna know how their relationship will turn out...Xd

pls do write more...i'll be waiting for awesome update from you^^

Re: Wow! gooberso1 October 20 2010, 05:23:11 UTC

It's not a problem!
I like doing spots.. because...
I can. XDDDD

Aww, thank you for all of the nice words! I'm thinking about adding a little bit of a onJongKey twist to the story, since... he's too breathtaking. XDDD

Thanks again~ <3

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wishunew October 19 2010, 06:20:51 UTC

omg this is sooooo cute! next to kinki jinki, nerd!onew is my favorite!

plz continue!

gooberso1 October 20 2010, 05:05:08 UTC

Oh, thank you for reading! Glad you liked it! :)

ps. Kinki!Jinki is really fun to read! And Angry!Jinki too! I want to write something with that someday. /shot

towelettepower October 19 2010, 06:30:35 UTC

spot. ^^/

towelettepower October 19 2010, 07:32:44 UTC

I love dork!onew and your writing. I actually envy onew in here. I wouldn't be able to ask somebody for that kind of help. ;_;
HAHA. I really like key in here. omo, i really like this. n_n
i'm looking forward to the next chapters! ^^/

gooberso1 October 20 2010, 05:39:03 UTC

I love Dorky!Onew too much! He's so funny. XDDD And thanks for complimenting my writing, it's not that good yet. ;_; I'm jealous of Onew too, I guess he cares too much about his 'future girlfriend' to think about being embarrassed!
Thank you for reading soo much!

melodixminor October 19 2010, 06:53:12 UTC

nerdy onew is totally cute and believable~ ^^ haha key is totally intimidating him and even though I don't really read onkey I find it incredibly amusing~ keke hope you update soon~

gooberso1 October 20 2010, 05:48:49 UTC

I'm glad to hear that he's believable~ I can picture nerd!Onew too easy. keke and I'll try my best to keep things amusing and light hearted. lots of fun times ahead with onkey and Jongyu ! XDDDD

mountpurple October 20 2010, 03:14:34 UTC

Center parts are never in style. Never.
LOLOLOLLMAOLROFLDFJSDJK, TURE THAT. LOL.
this is so fun to read :DD
cant wait for next chapter!

gooberso1 October 20 2010, 05:49:56 UTC

But... center parts are sooo sexy.