After 132 chapters I can say that your writing just gets better and better and this chapter was sublime; I could quote just about every line in it but the following I thought just so exquisitely beautiful "ennis gave jack a serving of exactly what he needed -- stuffed and trussed until monkey was transformed into one heavenly sigh borne of desire: a street wise villain whose heart of gold offered all that he had to give and more; love without question or restraint, their silver cord-connected souls tangled and wound delightfully. a song in the key of C full of caring and compassion, for concern without any minor chords, although they did miss on occasion; a song practiced as much as life allowed. a love composed by the gods above, and aided by thousands of unseen angels working hard
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it does? oh wow, i thought i was slipping in.. style. i dunno, sometimes the smex overrides everything. not that it's not fun to write, but yeah. thanks, i'm glad you like that part. it took a while to do, i had words like symphony and orchestrate in there too, it was difficult to figure out what to leave/take out. :)
yay, snowball. i'm glad i put her/him in there... there is a new reader that's just now commenting on earlier chapters, so i get to see them in the emails and am reminded of events/happenings. people like lisa (who had a crush on jack big time, and who made ennis a little worried), and wayne, and jerome, etc. it's fun to go back and forth with the other characters.
heh, it should be kinda easy! i wish there was a pic of a net tank top like yog wore, to show how neat it is.
omg.*dies* words can not express how much i loved this chapter,especially the first part,and didn't want it to end.they did all of my favourite things.one bathing the other(and in this case sponge bath!!guh), and then sleeping like that and just being all in love with each other. aaah ♥
jack then used the towel on ennis's face on one side, making the smile frown and the eye chinese, making the nose flat when pushing down. an ear was tugged, the sideburn smoothed out. then ennis turned his head around so jack could wash the other side. asdfghjklll!!that was just the most adorable thing.he is so precious. i looooove the thumb sucking.the toe, not so much.
it was almost painful for ennis to extract himself from jack's body for they had become one, and to hear jack groan when he did slip out was almost tortuous on this idaho morning. their hands stayed clasped a longer time, bodies still twitching as their bliss wound down, at least until they smelled the coffee.ooo i didn't get what ennis wants bobby to knit.matching tank tops? :D
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LOL the toe was just more like jack teasing ennis, more to make him laugh :D
yay, i thought the sponge bath would be kinda nice to add, sort of a ritualistic thing to do, covering the whole body like that. it's sort of a prelude for what's to come.
oh c'mon, i thought it would be easy to figure out! he's embarrassed to say it, that should be enough. remember what else he likes that doesn't get washed? i'll have to have bobby make it in the next chapter.
"love without question or restraint, their silver cord-connected souls tangled and wound delightfully. a song in the key of C full of caring and compassion, for concern without any minor chords, although they did miss on occasion; a song practiced as much as life allowed. a love composed by the gods above, and aided by thousands of unseen angels working hard."
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yay, snowball. i'm glad i put her/him in there... there is a new reader that's just now commenting on earlier chapters, so i get to see them in the emails and am reminded of events/happenings. people like lisa (who had a crush on jack big time, and who made ennis a little worried), and wayne, and jerome, etc. it's fun to go back and forth with the other characters.
heh, it should be kinda easy! i wish there was a pic of a net tank top like yog wore, to show how neat it is.
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i almost dread writing it, as i don't know how to net! not that well at least.
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words can not express how much i loved this chapter,especially the first part,and didn't want it to end.they did all of my favourite things.one bathing the other(and in this case sponge bath!!guh), and then sleeping like that and just being all in love with each other. aaah ♥
jack then used the towel on ennis's face on one side, making the smile frown and the eye chinese, making the nose flat when pushing down. an ear was tugged, the sideburn smoothed out. then ennis turned his head around so jack could wash the other side.
asdfghjklll!!that was just the most adorable thing.he is so precious.
i looooove the thumb sucking.the toe, not so much.
it was almost painful for ennis to extract himself from jack's body for they had become one, and to hear jack groan when he did slip out was almost tortuous on this idaho morning. their hands stayed clasped a longer time, bodies still twitching as their bliss wound down, at least until they smelled the coffee.ooo i didn't get what ennis wants bobby to knit.matching tank tops? :D ( ... )
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yay, i thought the sponge bath would be kinda nice to add, sort of a ritualistic thing to do, covering the whole body like that. it's sort of a prelude for what's to come.
oh c'mon, i thought it would be easy to figure out! he's embarrassed to say it, that should be enough. remember what else he likes that doesn't get washed? i'll have to have bobby make it in the next chapter.
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"love without question or restraint, their silver cord-connected souls tangled and wound delightfully. a song in the key of C full of caring and compassion, for concern without any minor chords, although they did miss on occasion; a song practiced as much as life allowed. a love composed by the gods above, and aided by thousands of unseen angels working hard."
Like slashers.
So, I guess I'll see ya around, huh...
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yes, keep an eyeball out. i will post a chapter soon..
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"hey."
"hey, darlin," ennis said when their eyes met.
Love! This.
Nev
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