Fic: Let Go [TVXQ RPS]

Oct 16, 2012 17:35

Title: Let Go
Fandom: TVXQ
Pairing: Yunho/Changmin
Rating: NC17
Summary: Changmin wants something. Yunho isn’t sure he can give it.
Notes: For haeym's watersports prompt on the kink meme.

Let Go“Yunho,” Changmin says one evening. “Yunho, I want you to pee on me ( Read more... )

fic, pairing: yunho/changmin, fandom: tvxq

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haeym October 16 2012, 17:48:27 UTC
s-s-spot

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haeym November 8 2012, 08:26:55 UTC
There’s probably some sort of mathematical equation for working out the correct position for a man to stand in order to achieve optimum flow and pressure when he pees on his boyfriend.This is me, I always start to think about hilarious stuff during intimate intercourses so I couldn't help but laugh out loud when I read this. 'D ( ... )

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glitterburn November 8 2012, 13:08:16 UTC
Thank you! I think everyone thinks about weird stuff during intimate moments LOL idk, takes the pressure off (no pun intended, considering context XD)

Usually when I write watersports it addresses the kink in a completely different way - usually it delves into aspects of humiliation, public or otherwise, but I kind of didn't want to go there with HoMin. I guess this is more about the psychology of it rather than actual porn. gdi should just have written porn! XDDD

Post-coital watersports, I never considered that - intriiiiiguing! :D

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haeym November 8 2012, 17:04:31 UTC
I always then try to stifle my laughter and I probably look like an idiot which makes me want to laugh even harder. Gah. :D

Anyways yeah, I think many watersports fics often include the humiliation aspect and I don't really see it fit for a Homin fic? It makes either or maybe even both of them OOC. It's really nice to read fics like this which are actually really dirty yet they deal with such psychological undertones at the same time. 'D PWP is always good tho ahem.

That's actually what I first had in mind, if I had written this. :D

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doovlynsidhe October 16 2012, 21:23:33 UTC
Only you could take a kink that usually sends me running for the hills and make it just....so...arhgljf;dkjg.

You are one of the best things to happen to HoMin. *__*

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glitterburn October 17 2012, 07:05:35 UTC
Thank you for giving it a go even though it's not a kink that interests you :)

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diagon October 16 2012, 21:57:06 UTC
Oh my, I do love me a matter-of-fact Changmin ( ... )

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glitterburn October 17 2012, 07:25:03 UTC
Thank you - ah, good point about the POV; this would be so different if it were from Yunho's POV but I liked the chance to poke at the baldness (or boldness, or both) of Changmin's matter-of-fact approach.

I knew you were going to say that bit. Probably the bit I like best too. And thank you for noticing the recurrent water theme! Plus I wanted the juxtaposition of food prep with discussion of bodily waste product, which comes together in the line Changmin says about drinking urine for health, and also Yunho and the drop of blood blahblahblah. Observe my over-thinking stylistic tendencies.

Okay now going to watch Bake-Off \o/

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glitterburn October 17 2012, 07:09:19 UTC
Thank you for reading this even though you're not interested in the kink aspect - you're braver than me, no matter who writes it there are certain things I just cannot read, so I really do appreciate that you could see past what made you uncomfortable and gave it a try anyway :)

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XD badhand02 October 17 2012, 10:01:35 UTC
Everything has it's first time... and yes this was mine too, just like the boys. Thank you for amazing and just enough of great introduction for the kink that I never even consider. now come to think of it I'm kinda into all that knotting and claiming kink. maybe I always had a thing for this kind in me... in some ways without realizing? Anyway, just as always i love how you made connection, between intimacy and sexual fantasy, so very believable and natural. I also like it this was although very new to the boys, they didn't make a big deal out of it... I liked that everyday atmosphere. Just something this couple try, nothing too huge. I did enjoy reading this. thank you!

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glitterburn October 17 2012, 15:57:23 UTC
Thank you ^^ Actually my first time writing M/M watersports, the other 3 I've written were M/F or F/F and more in a D/s context, so this was a very different take on it for me, making it more of natural thing and not a big deal, as you pointed out. Thank you for your thoughts!

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