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"EVERYONE BUT ME" (Edited)

Dec 28, 2008 21:29

TITLE: "EVERYONE BUT ME"
AUTHOR: doppelgangerqaf
BETAED BY: buzziecat (Thank you for the suggestions on this one!!!!)
RATING: R; other warning--angst.
WORD COUNT: 292 words.
A/N: Ahm, this is not my first original fic. I've written a lot in my native tongue and also, I've written a short one which I've posted in my original fiction comm panitik_ni_dops; but still I'm nervous. This is ( Read more... )

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doppelgangerqaf December 30 2008, 02:23:47 UTC

It's actually a spin of something bigger; the characters are somewhat the same but different.. Did that make sense? There's more to this one and unlike the 'bigger' project, it's humurous :O) I'm glad you liked it :O) I appreciate you reading it, really!

HUGS!
*Dops

bjfangirl87 December 29 2008, 20:08:28 UTC

That was hot and sweet, and sounded a lot like my first time kissing a girl.

I really liked it!

doppelgangerqaf December 30 2008, 02:24:49 UTC

Thank you so much. Yeah, first kiss--no matter who or what gender you are kissing- is always hot and sweet *le sigh*
I'm glad you liked it :O)

*Dops

trintiff December 29 2008, 20:11:18 UTC

Really good! 285 words was simply not nearly enough! You just HAVE to continue!

--Cindy

doppelgangerqaf December 30 2008, 02:25:30 UTC

Hi Cindy. I might post more of this... I'm glad you liked it. I really appreciate your comment!

*Dops

buzziecat December 29 2008, 20:17:08 UTC

This is a good beginning, Dops. It teases with questions as to where it will go. More to come, hopefully?

If beta refers to proof-reading, I will try it, if you like.
(Maybe not till 4AM.) :)

doppelgangerqaf December 30 2008, 02:29:20 UTC

Hey there! OMG I just realized you sent me messages... OH I LIKE YOUR ICON... Do I have something like that too? I think so *looks for icon* I am such a nerd haha

Okay so I posted something for you... here's the link:

http://doppelganger44.livejournal.com/58779.html

Just click on it and the page will pop up.

Oh and here's another one... I thought you might like it as well:

http://doppelganger44.livejournal.com/59168.html

I'm glad you liked this ficlet... I actually am thinking of continuing this one...

Oh, you will beta for me? COOL! Yeah, four am sounds good hahahaha I fell asleep early last night... WOW I didn't see it coming, I sat on the couch and --poof!-- I was out. I woke up at 5.30 am... Heh...

7qt December 30 2008, 08:37:08 UTC

Read this one too!! - The last line- "...Everybody but me ..." Really leaves tremendous scope for lots more !!-Carry on please will ya'- An ' I've alwayz loved the name "AUBERY" -It is such a lovely name - Holds a lot of poignancy -I dunno why - Maybe 'coz I,ve always loved the song by the, "BREAD" called - " AUBERY" -It goes llike this -Maybe you have heard it - "An' Aubey was her name ...But not so very odinary girl ,a name ..But who's to blame ..For a love that wouldn't bloom...For a heart that never played in tune ...Like a lovely melody that ev'ry one can sing...take away the words that ryme ..It doesn't mean a thing....An' Aub'ry was her name ...We tripped an' danced 2gether to the moon ...But where was June ...Oh-It never came around...If it did It never made a sound....Maybe I was absent or was listenin' 2 fast-...Catchin' all the words but then the meaning goin' past....God I miss the girl ...an' I'd go thousand times aroun' the world ...Just to be ...Closer to her ...Than to meeeee......" An' It carries on - The song IS ( ... )

doppelgangerqaf January 1 2009, 20:48:54 UTC

Oh, I love that song!!!! That's my favorite BREAD song. Might sound silly but err I do get teary-eyed whenever I hear the song... I am working on continuing this. But it is actually a spin off something I'm working on... Ahm, something more serious and hopefully will work out haha And where have you been? I think I got a PM and email from you right? I have to check. I haven't checked all my emails. I'm kind of lie-lowing... The holidays got me so tired. But tomorrow, I'm "back to work"-- on here, LJ, I mean hehe. I have to post holiday fics for qaf_translated. Man that will take ALL DAY.... Can't wait to start!

How was your NEW YEAR'S????

:O) HUGS!
*Dops

7qt January 3 2009, 07:15:40 UTC

No U don't sound silly at all !!-I,myself almost fall apart listening to it f-But then most of'BREAD'S' songs are like that-My "New Year's'- was a blast-I'm still a little off grid !-But I'll come around-These days it's so fuckin' cold-It's hard to really move your butt !!-But I'm getting there-Good to hear you're working on your writing-So am I-Fics an' Lyrics-I dunno whether I'll ever get a break in this line -But...I do it anyway-keeps me sane an' coz It's just somethin' that comes naturally to me -God knows!!-An' Hey!! -When are we goin' to get to read your reincarnation one !!-I'm really dyin' to read that-Hope soon !!- I'm really lookin' forward to that one-Don't make the wait too long??!! -Talk to me -good to hear from u -Take care-Lotsa HUGGS !!-