Aww, wow! You were my author! This is so cool. I really love this. It's such a unique view. It's very cute and awesome, and I love your view of what happened in the original fic.
Weellll.....this is definitely one of those "be careful what you wish for" times. Hee. When you said "different POV" I'm pretty sure you didn't mean that of an inanimate object, much less FOUR of them
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HEE, no, I really liked it! My only problem with it was there wasn't enough porn! *coughs* yes, I know I have a problem. It's not my fault!
And I did pick up on where you'd set the fic, and I really liked your take on it. I also like that it was just about the one scene, with the reminiscing about the other times. ♥
OMG. Dude. I still owe my Sweet Charity from FOREVER ago because my Sam/Dean pornfu is so broken. It's a terrible thing. I wanted some porn too! Hee. ;)
I'm glad you could see your story elements here and there. Thanks again!
This is so incredibly witty and unique and clever and FUN, I can hardly stand it!! Just the concept alone is so creative, and your execution ROCKS MY SOCKS! (The German exclamations! The discussion of lubricant! Gotta re-prime first. Takin’ a lot longer than what it ought to, seems to me. AHAHAAHHAAAA!!!)
Hee! Your comment makes me squee! Coming from the queen of crack(vids) herself, this is high praise. :) Seriously, I kept saying to PT, "I don't want this to be cracky. It needs to be sweet and funny, not over-the-top-cracky." I dunno if I succeeded. Talking guns will probably end up classified under "crack" in someone's memories. But I think the "sweet" and "awwwww" and "hee" still came through, so I'm happy.
I'm really glad to see your comment about execution. The most difficult part of this was the format...there was no omnipotent POV. By setting it as us listening to a conversation, there was no one to say "...Bill said." or "Sig stammered."
I tinkered endlessly with words or phrases or accents trying to get the voices to be discernible without a single dialog tag. The next-to-last line..."What?" was intentionally left vague, but the rest...whew. What a project! Thank you so much for commenting on that!
Is there better feedback than flappyhands? I THINK NOT!
I am glad to hear from someone who remembers the original. I was hoping it both stood alone, and yet kept enough elements of the original to complement it.
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on a side note, our fandom is very weird.
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::squints at you::
Hee. I'm glad you liked! :)
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THANK YOU!
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And I did pick up on where you'd set the fic, and I really liked your take on it. I also like that it was just about the one scene, with the reminiscing about the other times.
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I'm glad you could see your story elements here and there. Thanks again!
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You are a wonder. *mems this right quick*
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I'm really glad to see your comment about execution. The most difficult part of this was the format...there was no omnipotent POV. By setting it as us listening to a conversation, there was no one to say "...Bill said." or "Sig stammered."
I tinkered endlessly with words or phrases or accents trying to get the voices to be discernible without a single dialog tag. The next-to-last line..."What?" was intentionally left vague, but the rest...whew. What a project! Thank you so much for commenting on that!
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Thanks so much for reading!
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I am grinning like a maniac! :D :D :D
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I am glad to hear from someone who remembers the original. I was hoping it both stood alone, and yet kept enough elements of the original to complement it.
Thanks so much for your kind words! :)
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