The obligatory critique post!

Here's the place to tell me if I'm failing, "doing it wrong", or even passing with a decent grade. I'd love to see how I'm doing! I don't want to ruin one of my favourite characters, so I'd really like some advice!

I'd love it if you could suggest some things I could do to improve. Thank you! I'm trying hard, so I'll ( Read more... )

-Giita + portable amp
-School uniform + schoolbag
-A box of plushies and useless trinkets
-CD player with the HTT CD and cassette
-A box of her normal clothes
-School festival outfit
-Photo album from home
-Chicken kigurumi suit
-Cell phone + charger
-Scarf and mittens