(two shot) What's Lost is Found 1/2

[gennaration]

Title: What's Lost is Found
Status: Complete
Rating: PG-13
Length: Two-shot
Genre: Comedy and Romance
Pairing(s): JunChun, TaeSu, minor KangTae and YunJae
Summary: Kim Junsu is a divorced composer, trying to find himself after two years of getting use to being divorced with his wife, Taeyeon. But now that Taeyeon has found herself someone she might want

Comments

[animeaddict96]

“Did you sleep late?-“ A gasp, “Is-is he there?” Junsu could visual Jaejoong’s face just lighting up in excitement because these sorts of things made Jaejoong excited.

Turn it to "Junsu could visualize Jaejoong's face just lighting up, because these sort of things make Jaejoong excited."
I didn't see that one :P

I also still love that part! Lol, Jaejoong was so funny there :))

[gennaration]

Oh~ but it's suppose to be in past tense, bb ^^;

xD; I didn't realize I made Jae a funny character until I re-read it a couple of times.

[animeaddict96]

What do you mean it's supposed to be in past tense? I don't get it :P

[gennaration]

The fic's formatted in past tense and if I change 'made' to 'make' it would make it present tense! ^^

[animeaddict96]

actually it's alright to make it make, (and don't forget about visualize~ and the other parts of the sentence that needs editing) because you are supposed to turn it into present tense if it's a general truth, which means that those kinds of things always make jaejoong excited. If it's just made, it can mean that in the future, jaejoong won't like those kinds of things anymore. :)

[gennaration]

I fixed it~~~

[animeaddict96]

ok :D