Summer

Aug 11, 2008 13:46

Title: Summer - one shot / short story
Author: gee_tarded
Pairing: BellDom
Rating: PG
Summary: Dom's POV thinking about something.
Disclaimer: As fake as Achmed's arse.
Notes: This is my first attempt to write a fic. Thanks a lot to my lovely and very helpful beta dolce_piccante The fic was inspired by rocketqueen1979 drew sometime last last week. I'm talking about

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belldom, summer, slash

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rowanfaire August 18 2008, 15:38:48 UTC
This was completely lovely! And first fic? Difficult to believe, it's so good.

Favourite line:
. . . I love your winter too. I’m able to love it because of you.
Simple, touching and heartfelt.

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gee_tarded August 18 2008, 23:34:24 UTC
Believe you me, it's my first ;)

Thanks a lot am so glad you like it.

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musclemuseum29 September 16 2008, 11:30:43 UTC
Because I'm an utter douchebag, I can't find the "post a comment button" (look, I have my moments of severe stupidity XD) And not only that, but why on *attempts to use italics* earth did i not think to check your journal out?! I loved this, love this. I remember reading it a while ago, when I first discovered this nifty community and falling in love with it, thinking it rather fitting for the picture- and I'm now more honoured than I was that you're commenting my story *blushes* Your such an amazing writer, very talented, and you just have a lovely way with words. So a super massive black holes thank you for not only the comments, but this beautiful gem of a story (im still disgruntled that I've only just realised you wrote it, and that's its here ( ... )

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gee_tarded September 17 2008, 05:45:54 UTC
* blushes profusely ( ... )

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musclemuseum29 September 17 2008, 07:42:32 UTC
i think the first line i quoted to you is fine love- as you said ther'es a touch of feminity to the stroy, but more than that, in such simple words its described the basic human emotion and reaction we have to people- Your knees really do go weak and you feel light :) But what was very intense from that quote was the 'both then and now' which showed that this love Dom has is for always.
And no wonder the seocnd quote was so good XD Lol and yeah, I tihnk DOm is the female in this as well, in most stories I can see him being the female because of his vanity- with his clothes and we all know matt caught him moisturizing and he's quite the hygene freak, but then Matt's scrawny and sings like a girl :)
But yeah, point being, you're a gem
*hugs* xxo Stephie

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gee_tarded September 17 2008, 09:09:19 UTC
It's meant to be forever. Gaaah! I'm fangirling over BellDom I swear, I'd be the happiest person if these two just come out and announce to us that they're in love with each other.

Sorry about that :S

Thanks again Stephie ~.~
Nice name btw.

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