Summer

[gee_tarded]

Title: Summer - one shot / short story
Author: gee_tarded
Pairing: BellDom
Rating: PG
Summary: Dom's POV thinking about something.
Disclaimer: As fake as Achmed's arse.
Notes: This is my first attempt to write a fic. Thanks a lot to my lovely and very helpful beta dolce_piccante The fic was inspired by rocketqueen1979 drew sometime last last week. I'm talking about

Comments

[musclemuseum29]

Because I'm an utter douchebag, I can't find the "post a comment button" (look, I have my moments of severe stupidity XD) And not only that, but why on *attempts to use italics* earth did i not think to check your journal out?! I loved this, love this. I remember reading it a while ago, when I first discovered this nifty community and falling in love with it, thinking it rather fitting for the picture- and I'm now more honoured than I was that you're commenting my story *blushes* Your such an amazing writer, very talented, and you just have a lovely way with words. So a super massive black holes thank you for not only the comments, but this beautiful gem of a story (im still disgruntled that I've only just realised you wrote it, and that's its here!)
"- Only you, both then and now, know how to make my knees wobble. -" fileld me with that happiness, you know the one where you just glow and beam and you can feel the warmth? Yeah :) and this "- Watching you here with me, your eyes half closed, I can’t help but smile. You’re the epitome of what peace of mind and happiness means. -" This one really left me wit ha warm summer feeling, and it compliments rocketqueens picture so beautifully. But you captured some beautiful imagery- and I know the pictures there, but you gave it an allure with your descriptions of Dominics emotions, the pictures you painted with words from Dominic (hoplessly structred by me, sorry but you get the gist, right?) was what really made this. Absolutely gorgeous, I lvoe it just as much, myabe more, as I did the first time I read this. It still gives me that sweeling of warmth, and that bubble of happiness and that's turly wonderful :)

[gee_tarded]

* blushes profusely*

I don't know what to say when you said I was an amazing writer because it's my first and since then I haven't posted any new material. Thank you though. I really am thankful for Lizz (dolce_piccante) for the encouraging words, she really helped me a lot with this story. Again, thank you for thinking of me that way. :) You just made me smile ear to ear.

When I wrote the first line you quoted, it looks like he's fangirling over Matt, I'm thinking of writing it differently but can't find the words that will fit in it so I just leave it like that. It does help with the story later on. :)

The second one is my favourite, it's a personal thought actually. I was thinking I am the one saying that to Matt when I wrote it. The warm feeling, yes, I do felt that with that picture. The picture is so lovely and beautiful, words cannot describe how I am deeply in love with it until now.

For me Dom is the female of their relationship that's why there's a touch of femininity on the story.

Thank you for the lovely and detailed words. ;)

[musclemuseum29]

i think the first line i quoted to you is fine love- as you said ther'es a touch of feminity to the stroy, but more than that, in such simple words its described the basic human emotion and reaction we have to people- Your knees really do go weak and you feel light :) But what was very intense from that quote was the 'both then and now' which showed that this love Dom has is for always.
And no wonder the seocnd quote was so good XD Lol and yeah, I tihnk DOm is the female in this as well, in most stories I can see him being the female because of his vanity- with his clothes and we all know matt caught him moisturizing and he's quite the hygene freak, but then Matt's scrawny and sings like a girl :)
But yeah, point being, you're a gem
*hugs* xxo Stephie

[gee_tarded]

It's meant to be forever. Gaaah! I'm fangirling over BellDom I swear, I'd be the happiest person if these two just come out and announce to us that they're in love with each other.

Sorry about that :S

Thanks again Stephie ~.~
Nice name btw.