[oneshot] no hope, no love, no glory

Aug 27, 2010 12:58

Title: no hope, no love, no glory
Pairing: cristiano ronaldo/kaká
Rating: nc17
Genre: romance, slice-of-life, angst
Warnings: swearing, sexual themes
Author: gdgdbaby
Notes: five times ricardo shuts cris down without even knowing it. 1,358 words.

“please,” he says, “call me ricardo.” )

length: oneshot, ship: cristiano/ricardo, #fic, fandom: football

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envoler August 27 2010, 17:54:42 UTC
this is ricardo, though; ricky with his caroline and his luca and a christian life that has nothing to do with cristiano, and it’s a thing a foreigner like him can’t ever hope to penetrate. and so he doesn’t say a thing, pulls his hand back and rests it on ricardo’s arm until his food comes.

♥ SERIOUSLY, WHY ARE YOU LIKE THIS!

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gdgdbaby August 28 2010, 00:18:09 UTC
because they are a doomed ship T_T! ty for reading bb T_T

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freefallskyline August 27 2010, 21:03:40 UTC
caroline laughs high and clear, and he thinks with a sudden, guilty jolt of self-loathing that he could never ruin this-the beautiful family they have, the way ricardo likes up like fireworks on ano novo when he sees her, how in love they are.

aghaghhwgawhgasdjhagwejahew I hate you

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gdgdbaby August 28 2010, 00:18:42 UTC
:( :( but whyyyyy, i love you :(

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inesdelsol August 27 2010, 22:32:11 UTC
I love it. It's full of unspoken words and actions. Such tension and anticipation. Perfect.

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gdgdbaby August 28 2010, 00:19:05 UTC
ahhh, thank you so much. i'm really glad you enjoyed this ♥!

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compatable August 27 2010, 22:37:13 UTC
i feel like i shouldn't be commenting on this, but i actually know who cristiano ronaldo and i kind of love to make fun of him whenever there's a mention. but dear lord, your writing wouldn't let me do that and this was sad and it's even worse that when i googled ricardo kaka, the first picture is of him and his family. “the ref was an imbecile,” ricardo says sharply. idk how to say this, but you write like a chameleon. you can merge yourself into any fandom.

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gdgdbaby August 28 2010, 00:22:12 UTC
wahhh never feel that way, okay? :3

eeeee i definitely understand where you're coming from about making fun of cris, because he can be pretty lol-worthy haha :') a lot of people ship cris/kaka and idk if i can see them as anything other than a doomed couple because kaka has a family and is so freaking christian, and for all of cris's faults i think he at least has the... wisdom? to refrain from doing anything that might hurt his friend. i'm really glad you enjoyed this though T_T and sdlfjgdsf such high praise :( thank you so muchhh sigh ♥

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compatable August 28 2010, 02:52:45 UTC
lol tmz does an amazing segment of making fun of cristiano and the pants he wears. i do not know how his butt doesn't suffocate all the time. their dynamics ): that is so depressing to know about them, and this is what really makes me sad about getting into sports fandoms, because most athletes are in established hetero relationships. lol jw but is there homewrecker fic?

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gdgdbaby August 28 2010, 04:09:51 UTC
oh god his fashion sense seriously leaves much to be desired, ide TT also his hair... get rid of the faux hawk, cris :|

sdfkgjdsf yes this is really really true. i mean there's always ~au~ fic, but idk, that's just a whole different ballpark, and i love realistic fic :( and the wives & girlfriends :( (lmao luckily jr and apolo didn't have that problem n__n) and ohhh i am pretty sure there's homewrecker fic :| i don't actually read a lot of this pairing myself, since i'm more into the german nt, but i really appreciate the ship n__n

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m0nkeysbrains August 28 2010, 03:01:20 UTC
AWWWWW i was rooting for that...! ah well i'm a realist above all else so thanks for making it realistic. hahahh. no seriously, brilliant description and banter and just...very good. i don't usually read this pairing but i liked this a lot.

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gdgdbaby August 28 2010, 04:10:33 UTC
ahh thank you so much! i'm glad that you liked it though it had a sad ending :( thank you for giving this a chance even though you don't usually read cris/kaka :D!

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