"Out Of Bounds"

[gay_lovecompany]

Title: Out Of Bounds
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[gay_lovecompany]

Seems almost everything I write turns out cute. -.-..
Yeah, if you think I could improve it anywhere, you could just leave it in a comment here. I don't care if the public sees my mistakes. XD

[gay_lovecompany]

Thank you~ I love first person because you can express more emotions that way and you could use I, me, etc instead of their name. >.>
I'll add your suggestions when I have the chance, but I can't right now.. busy again. =/

I felt like leaving ONE person out.. but.. he sneaked his way in there. Hey! Not my idea. Alex(the one I wrote this for) told me to do that! I just do what I'm told. XD

I have another Super Junior fic. =/ It's my first go at it so it's not really finished yet. I'm probably going to add more to it. Want to read it anyways? (It's friends locked too.)

[gay_lovecompany]

We just write different I guess. The thing with me about third person is that it's annoying to readers if you keep using names. So then the writer uses words like "drummer", "vocalist", etc and I hate doing that. -.-

Uruha is sneaky too. He wormed his way into my fic. >.> I've never wrote a GazettE fic period. Except for this one. XD

Ahh.. okay. Let me put it on public.

[gay_lovecompany]

Well smut writers are basically the same. =/ Yeah just say "the singer" and the read would be like, "what? singer? There's 13 of them!" >.>

Miyavi is sneakier.

Little slow.. <.

[gay_lovecompany]

Dang. <.<*