Title: Yet You Are More Than Traps Or Nets (The Longer and Uncut Remix)
Author:
LilyAylRating: All
Remixed Story:
"He Came to My Hand like the Nesting Dove" by
cupidsbow (scroll down)
Warnings/Notes: SGA. Vampire AU. This was written for the
gateverse_remix. Thanks to
cinaed and
doubleL27 for the beta. The title comes from Rilke's Sonnets To Orpheus. Be sure to check the comments for
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at work, so going to be quick: but very good; loved Rodney; loved Ladon. Would have liked more fighting scenes, but very good. :)
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I liked: He was stronger and thanks to Teyla, he was more skilled in single combat, but this was a Queen.
I got a *little* confused in the turn of play: I think a bit more detail in the first 'drinking' would have been good - some description of the breaking skin, rush of warm blood, filing John with strength, etc. Then you could have skimmed over the other times. Because I was like: he's what? :: re-reads :: Oh! So a little more detail would have helped tie it together.
But very well done! heh, action sequences are fun :) Thanks for writing this one!
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