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[fillyia]

Well, my job for this month was to write a "gothic romance novel." I... wasn't really sure what that was when I first signed up for the job, but after doing a little research, I hope I came up with something fitting. I'm still working on it, but I figured I could show an excerpt before I submitted the whole thing. Hang on...

[here Twilight uses

Comments

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[wasoneof]

Congratulations, that is actually the very worst thing I have ever read.

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[fillyia]

-Excuse me?

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[wasoneof]

What part of what I said was unclear? Your writing is absolutely terrible.

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[fillyia]

[she may not be an amazing writer, she knows that much, BUT STILL]

What exactly do you think is wrong with it?

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[wasoneof]

The writing is hackneyed and the plot tedious, for a start.

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[fillyia]

"For a start?"

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[wasoneof]

For someone that professes to be a writer, you aren't very good with understanding things, are you?

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[fillyia]

I know my writing isn't the best, but now you're just lambasting me!

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[wasoneof]

Look at it this way: From here on, you can only fail less.

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[fillyia]

What is your problem?!

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[wasoneof]

Aside from having wasted my time reading that drivel, I do not have a problem.

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[fillyia]

If you've got nothing nice or constructive to say, then don't say anything at all.

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[wasoneof]

I don't need advice on manners from a pony, of all things.

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[fillyia]

I am not a thing!

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[wasoneof]

You are a pony and a commoner. You have no right to give advice to God.

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[fillyia]

You think you're a god?