Bricks in the Wall, Chapter 23: No Retaliation
Title: No Retaliation
Characters: Peter, Sylar
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Violent sex, coercion during sex, possible dub-con. Peter gets really dark.
Word count: 7,000
Setting: The Wall.
Summary: Peter tries to resist Sylar’s advances, but his own darkest desires betray him.
Notes: Beta by means2bhuman. Set a few days after a fist fight between the two of ( Read more... )
"Or maybe that was just the face Sylar was using now that he could be seen." --Clever Peter's catching on.
Peter's so funny. Why is it he feels guilty for not "going along with the plot"? I pictured it as his angst speaking out.
I perked up right about when Sylar touched Peter's bangs and promptly felt a violent surge of jealousy... ;) I was cheering Sylar on becuase I/we all knew that that was the right track. Plus molesting Peter's bangs is a plus in any fic.
"Sylar paused there, rubbing one finger back and forth over Peter’s lower lip, folding it down just a little." Good grief.
I liked the minute, semi-break in the action when Peter examined Sylar's hands. I have no idea where that came from, I kind of like that, it's not really explained literally, but I like my imagination: Peter's trying to do some touching, have some intimacy of his own. He's curious, too.
Oh, and whatever you said about Peter being OOC? I didn't find it so. What DD said about truth and sex going hand in hand was the description/summary I was looking for becuase for Peter it makes sense. I think if he's pushed enough, he'd show passion (and aggression, combined) in this way. The guy's got have repressed feelings and urges and this is an excuse, Peter's human and Sylar's not badly injured or complaining, etc. I thought it was, at the very least, a very hot exploration into his character.
That said. The biting...kinky Petey...Wow.
"An inch or two from the prize, Peter’s hand made a fist, Sylar stopped with a gasp and a flash of anger." -- Teasing Petey. Oh, he learns fast. My my my...
For whatever reason, I love the clear image I have of Sylar looking over Peter's shoulder to say "If you hold up your end of the bargain" And I know Peter isn't shaking particularly hard, but Sylar being shaken around like a dog told to heal...That's exactly the sort of intimate aggression we see from Peter in canon, love it.
And, whoa! Look how turned on Peter is! It really makes me wonder if this is Peter's sort of first time being pretty damn uninhibited, you know? Not having to pull his punches or tip-toe around blowing up a city or unleashing a virus or falling head over heels into heartbreak.
“Kay,” Peter said, nibbling up to the man’s jaw, kissing and tasting, losing himself in the moment as his mind supplied him images of Sylar in lust for him, trying on dominant or submissive for size." -- This is wonderful. Yay for Peter!
"Peter tilted Sylar’s head back to even to look right into his eyes. “Wildly enthusiastic,” Peter rasped, locking his lips over Sylar’s startled ones, turning his head to plunge his tongue inside deeply. Sylar made a surprised noise at the invasion, then a moan as he sagged into it. Peter snatched him away before he got too invested. “How are you? As a bottom?” -- This is...just plain great.
Painfully good usage of the word 'advertising'
“Were you willing?” -- I'm caught between gaping, laughing and snorting. Tact much, Peter? Sylar's rubbing off, I see, not yet in the sexual context!
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