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Bricks in the Wall, Chapter 18: Butter Butt

Apr 16, 2012 15:54

Title: Butter Butt
Characters: Sylar, Peter
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Butter used as a lubricant
Words: 2500
Setting: The Wall
Summary: Pretty much PWP. Sylar has been touching Peter up an awful lot. He finally gets a favorable response out of it.

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bricks, sylar, !fandom: heroes, peter, rated nc-17, sylar/peter

Comments 9

lornrocks April 24 2012, 03:25:33 UTC

Awwww, this was great. Really, really wonderful, and very sweet. You have a wonderful way with words, I can imagine everything perfectly at the end, and I just loved that sudden intimacy at the end, especially Sylar fixing Peter's shirt and all that.

Just adorbs.

game_byrd April 24 2012, 03:53:09 UTC

Yay! Thank you. Sylar and his 'don't know why I feel all lovey ... must be some sort of weird side effect of the sex ... here, let me groom you and be all affectionate because you're not telling me to GTFO already.' Sylar really doesn't understand his feelings. Peter will help him. :D

means2bhuman April 25 2012, 23:32:15 UTC

This was an interesting mix of things for me. Strangely it combined Sex in an Alley and Gentle Soul? Very strange ( ... )

game_byrd April 26 2012, 00:26:24 UTC

Pulling that stunt and Peter getting off on it/into it would literally never cross Sylar's mind
Yeah, getting whapped seems so much more likely. And I figure at this point, Sylar's *been* whapped quite a bit. Enough so that he (and Peter) have something of a routine - one hard hit and that's it, assuming Sylar backs off. So for Sylar it's become this simple equation of whether the contact is worth the strike.

Ooh, now I wonder if guilt-free is really what Peter wants? (clearly it is - he doesn't want the responsibility of...being the responsible one. Sylar won't/can't be the responsible one and Peter sure as hell doesn't want to do something and then angst about it later). I think Sylar would long-expect to be made the "guilty" or at-fault party if anything ever happened. For anyone to have sex with him, he'd have to be the one to blame. Otherwise, gee, it might mean they slept with him because he was a nice, handsome guy and they liked his personality or something similar.I'm sure Peter and Sylar will have all kinds of back and ( ... )

means2bhuman April 25 2012, 23:32:25 UTC

game_byrd April 26 2012, 00:39:04 UTC

Peter is one brave guy. I don't think anyone in their right mind would be comfortable with Sylar behind them, least of all with him being behind you for sexual purposes. Does Peter,like, not clue in that Sylar might be into serious hurt kinks like bloodletting or no-prep or kidney-punching during sex? He seems so unafraid of being, well, raped. Its weird to me. Maybe he thinks that in extending trust, he'll get some mutual trust going?Nope, never occurred to Peter that Sylar is A) that kinky or more importantly B) would do something that outside of social norms. (Yes, I know, serial killer we're talking about here, but I'm assuming we have a year or so of good Sylar behavior for Peter to have constantly observed ... so Peter has a decent read of Sylar's character ( ... )

dancingdragon3 September 13 2012, 17:05:38 UTC

I don't understand. I know I've commented on this before. Iv'e read it several times. Came back today for another reread for self soothing purposes as I have to take my computer back in the shop. :-(

This is so wonderfully hot and sexy. Love a Sylar that knows what he's doing! The start was a wonderful build of tension. Perfectly paced sex. Love Peter being noisy. Just a great read. And re read obviously. This and Playing Hard to Get, and the one where Peter is blindfolded are my three favorite Bricks in the Wall fic.

I adore you for this series.

game_byrd September 13 2012, 23:33:43 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad to hear that from you! I thought my constant Wall stuff was aggravating, but so often that's what the muse dishes up to me. So ... it's kind of like, either write Wall fic, or don't write anything.

Glad you loved it. You rereading inspired me to reread it. :D

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game_byrd January 17 2013, 02:09:46 UTC

LOL! I just have a very dirty mind. And asmodesgold had a fic where the guys were making cookies and got distracted into sex. It was quite a bit dirtier and kinkier than mine.

Actually, I have a fic where Sylar's first time is using olive oil. It's called Frenemies.

I think that maybe I've written too much of this stuff when for most fanfic tropes, I have either a story or at least a chapter where it's happened or been referenced. LOL.