#8
up past your bedtime
fireflies on summer nights
in the almost dark
#9
each repetition
one crash fading to a hiss
ocean under stars
A small note about Haiku #9
It went through 3 iterations in my notebook
and two just now while typing this entry
My favorite, which I include below is written in my pocket notebook
with a note beside it:
'not a haiku'
the sound
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