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Fiction (2/2)

Nov 12, 2011 15:05

Title: Fiction
Chapter: Part 2/2
Author: frolickings
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Sexual implications, language
Author's Note: The last part! Enjoy!

(Part One)

( When he's 16 years old, Hyunseung learns the significantly useful art of using his body against others. )

fantasy, pg-13, !fiction, !multi-chap, au, !fanfic, junseung

Comments 28

diuanna18 November 12 2011, 22:52:41 UTC

yayy i`m the first to comment,oh my this was so beautiful and i wish i could give you a proper comment like you deserve it really,you played with my emotions the entire time while i was reading the ending was beautifull,so they will always find each other in the end,really i loved every single part of this,and i hope you going to continue writing cause you're amazing.

frolickings November 13 2011, 02:50:50 UTC

Awww, thank you so much for commenting (oh, first one, nice!). I'm so happy that you liked it and thank you for the encouragement, it makes me more confident in my writing each day!

Thank you again~! ♥

ajin November 12 2011, 23:42:00 UTC

And here I was, thinking that I may be the last person in this fandom who loves writing long fics. I'm so happy this is long and detailed and is going to a point, not flapping about like a fish out of water ( ... )

frolickings November 13 2011, 02:34:55 UTC

Your comment made me smile so much and just... augh, thank you for leaving such a lovely comment. I feel like you just gave me a bunch of confidence -- posting fanfiction is nerve wracking but thank you... so much ( ... )

ajin November 13 2011, 02:48:24 UTC

I always try to comment on fics I really like. There's nothing like comments to motivate a writer after all :3

I used to write short one-shots but I'm never satisfied with them. It doesn't give you the same satisfaction, right?

World from books is idealistic. It teaches you all these good things which in the end don't help anyone in real life *sighs* But I feel you. I would take a farm somewhere in middle of nowhere lol

My mother tongue is so complicated that English is nothing compared. Been learning it for ages now so I'm happy I could fool you n__n

You deserved it. It felt good to be able to sing praises in a comment for once lol I do that rarely.
Odg, I feel embarrassed now though. I'm not too proud of my fics at all ;;

frolickings November 13 2011, 03:40:54 UTC

You're right! Every time I write something short, I'm like... "Only seven pages? That's like a children's book." Then I feel the need to nitpick and detail everything until it's almost a headache to read. :P Usually, it gets so winding and long that I just stop without finishing. So I'm quite proud I managed to end this one without it going on for days!

I'm glad you feel the same way! When I tell people I want a little isolated cottage by the sea, they're always wary and ask if I'm just being antisocial. ;; Ah, I just want to read books in peace!

How long have you been learning English for? Also, if you don't mind me asking, what's your mother tongue? I've been learning Chinese for four years and to this day, my teacher tries to carry conversations with me and I'm like standing here wondering if I've learned nothing at all lol.

Don't be embarrassed ~! You're so talented! I always get really excited when I see a talented, quality writer. ^o^

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dracoslovebunny November 13 2011, 00:04:27 UTC

This was so excellent. I was practically tearing up at points, but I am SO SO glad you gave this a happy ending! With the amount of emotion your writing (especially in the first part) forced me to feel for Hyunseung, I really ended up wanting a happy ending for him.

frolickings November 13 2011, 02:37:22 UTC

Aha, hello again! Thank you so much for commenting again. ;w; You are too sweet! ♥

Yes, while I am an evil little writer, who could possibly have a black enough heart to give poor Hyunseung a bad ending? Even I'm not that bad!

♥ Thank you for reading!

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frolickings November 13 2011, 02:45:11 UTC

;___; You are too nice to me. /sniffs

Thank you for taking the time to comment! Hehe, actually, that's one of my favorite lines! And, eek, it makes me so happy to know you'll reread some day!

Thank you again! ♥

jaerotic November 13 2011, 02:37:35 UTC

Oh god... I wish I could leave you a comment worthy of this story, but I find that I can't. I feel like it's just so intertwined with my emotions and my identity and I'm having such a hard time putting that into words. There were just, lines where I burst out crying... about 5 different times... and to be honest as I type this I still am. I'll just have you know that even this 'fantasy' rang so true during so many parts and that is part of what makes it so good. I don't think I've ever been this personally affected by a fic before. It's more than just /junseung/ at this point to be honest. It's just, a simply beautiful plot with beautiful writing ( ... )

frolickings November 13 2011, 03:18:05 UTC

Don't mind me, just fangirling over here over your amazing comment~~~~ Seriously, thank you SO much for your comment! It makes me unbelievably happy that it stirred up feelings. Although, I do apologize that it made you cry. ;___;

As much as I love to write angst, I reread this and was like... oh God, I would have to be a heartless woman not to give Hyunseung SOME semblance of a happy ending.

Once again, I can't thank you enough for leaving such a sweet comment. ♥ You're much too kind!