I emailed my friend and after a few back-and-forths I think I know what's wrong with Baby Snatcher. Now It's only a matter of figuring out how to fix it. I might only have to have to add stuff to the end, then I could start putting it up.
I got suggestions back from my beta for bang*bang. Thank you
poxical . I've gone through the story and have whittled
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