Comments | frkmgnt1: Fic: Do I Dare Disturb the Universe? Chapter 12: I Am Lazarus Pt 2

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Fic: Do I Dare Disturb the Universe? Chapter 12: I Am Lazarus Pt 2

Mar 29, 2020 13:14

~12~
I Am Lazarus

Part I here

'Ladies first' may have been a bit overly optimistic. Snow stumbles on the first step away from the wall, right arm curled across his stomach, and hand pressed bloodless against his rib cage. Lightning pulls his left arm across her shoulders, hangs onto his wrist with one hand, uses the hand and arm around his back ( Read more... )

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Comments 2

As for Part 2... amedamacherry March 29 2020, 20:27:08 UTC

Even though the kissing and loving was sweet and long awaited, I think the keyword for the relationship you are depicting here is TEAM. And that's the exact reason why I always liked the Lightning / Snow pairing, regardless of the fact that Snow was (unfortunately!) engaged with Serah. So this second part of the chapter was even more satisfying (at least for me ( ... )

Re: As for Part 2... frkmgnt1 March 30 2020, 04:13:32 UTC

I’m so glad that you liked the chapter. And you’re right: I was very excited to finally get to write this chapter. It took a long time to get to the reunion, and I really wanted there to be a payoff for everyone who stuck with it. In chapter 10, Lightning had to face the reality of Snow’s death, and her own inability to do anything to prevent it. That moment is what has allowed her to act on her feelings for him. The Lightning of Chapter 9 loved Snow, but would never have allowed herself to indulge that feeling by kissing him, or allowing him to kiss her in turn. When Snow tells Lightning that he is hers, she didn’t panic and freak out as she did in Chapter 1, because her near loss of him proved so much more terrifying than simply admitting the truth of their feelings for one another ( ... )