Fic: Do I Dare Disturb the Universe Chapter 7/?

[frkmgnt1]

Title: Do I Dare Disturb the Universe?
Author: frkmgnt1 
Rating: PG-13 or T (Pick your poison.  No graphic anything as of Chapter 7)
Pairing: Snow/Lightning, Snow/Serah
Chapter 7: Muttering Retreats ~8,500
Word Count so far ~47,000
Description: Snow has something he needs to say.  Lightning cannot hear it.
Genre: Angst angst and more angst.  Romance (Oh my god!

Comments

[vernasoelliah]

I realize that I am not a long-time supporter but I could not resist the chance to read this update. I have been looking forward to this-craving this-for ages and I loved it! Just.loved.it.
The jumbled thoughts at the beginning were clever. A result of your work in Evolution. There was also the familiar element of horror.
Sazh getting a kiss, fighting with Light, and being just plain adorable is the highlight of this chapter. You had him spot on.

Don't Be Silly

[frkmgnt1]

Don't be silly. Of course I was including you among the supporters. I was pretty much including anyone who is a 'friend' on this journal and has been encouraging and supporting me.

I'm so happy that you enjoyed the chapter! I wasn't sure about it but that happens when I work on a chapter for a long time. The more I look at it, the less I like it.

As for Sazh--I do so love him.

Thanks so much! Have a good one!

[mako_lies]

Hey there! I've been reading this from the beginning, and I just wanted to say that I really like this story. It's so hard to find plausible Lightning/Snow, especially post-game and you've really pulled it off here.

I love your interpretation of the characters and the plot you've got going. Your portrayal of Lightning is so angry and all over the place, it's fantastic. Great job! I'm looking forward to the next chapter of this.

(I'm going to friend you to keep an eye on your stories. XD)

[frkmgnt1]

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and I'm glad you liked this chapter.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Have a good day.

[amedamacherry]

So there was ONE chance to have some VIP bonus and I MISSED IT!!!
+$o/!§*=H$/#?^S(q= !!!!!! ಠ_ಠ
That’s so kind of you! I wish I’d looked earlier! Stupid me! >__You made it look like Lightning was found by those men. Tricky, but you couldn’t fool me this time! Haha! I knew you wouldn’t do that to her. (I mean not even YOU are so cruel

[frkmgnt1]

HA HA HA. I'm so sorry. I would have waited longer but once the week comes it gets more difficult to update.

I know, I'm a tricky bitch sometimes. Lightning LOVES being an unreliable narrator. And I'm glad the dreams worked, and don't worry--a reunion is imminent.

Sazh is LOVE, isn't he? He's so great, and he's under so much stress. Poor man.

And I'm glad the chapter as a whole worked. I really wasn't sure about it, but that's probably a function of staring at it for SO LONG. It's been finished but unpolished for about a month now. But I'm back in the groove now.

As for Snow-you are FIRST one to ask me about him. What he's been up to will be addressed. I haven't forgotten about him (though Hope seems to have forgotten his promise, hasn't he? To be fair, he has had other things on his mind.)

thanks so much for reading and reviewing. It's good to be back in the saddle! I missed this story. I missed writing in general lately. It works as a pretty decent painkiller. :D

Take care and have a good week!

[kaorikuni]

:< My review got deleted.
sobsobsob. and late review is late.
Well... I love this chapter! I know what you mean about hating transition chaps but it was needed and you didn't do bad. In fact, it was thrilling. All the action had me glued to my pc, reading to find out what happened next.
Angry Sazh is <3. I'm so happy he got to shine a lot in this chapter. He even got a kiss! Well done, old man.
And... her dreams broke my heart a little :<
I kinda thought Snow would appear... but wouldn't it be SO EPIC HILARIOUS if once he finally got to wherever the group is, they aren't there any more and they're attacking those bandits? So hilarious.
I'LL BE WAITING FOR NEXT MONTH. ACTUALLY I CAN'T WAIT ;;
/too excited about this fic
<3

[frkmgnt1]

LOL. I feel your pain with the deleted review. Yesterday I posted an update to my rec page 4 times before it actually posted. Something is very screwy with livejournal.

Sazh is love! He definitely deserved a kiss. And her dreams were supposed to be a bit heartbreaking.

Poor Snow did just get shoved to the side a bit, didn't he? Don't worry.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

[te_gr]

My, my. How horrible I am! When I saw this post, I started reading the chapter, then real life became crazy, I forgot to end it, and now with your comments on dA I've finally remembered and finished. So sorry for the late comment

[frkmgnt1]

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. No worries about the late comment. I know how life can get.

You should be able to find the rec if you go through the tags and click on recs. There's also a link one of the two Rec Master posts.

As for the Sherlock fandom--I would love to write something for that, but I have nothing planned. If you have something you'd like to see, perhaps you can inspire a short story. (Very short. Evolution is still ongoing and is still eating my brain.)

http://frkmgnt1.livejournal.com/33540.html

There's the link to the rec post.