What I love the most is that you don't know whether it was supposed to happen and they got closer because of the flash forward, or that it happened because they got closer.
I can only second Tine's thoughts, it's really interesting because you don't know if it would've happened if they hadn't had that flash forward!
I also really like the leaps in time and how we only get to know little moments of this one year, but how somehow everything falls into place at the end :)
I like to think that they could have changed the future if they wanted, but the feelings were already there so none of them really wants to, even if Dan tries. But not out of not wanting Kelly, but out of concern for him.
Thank you, I was quite surprised that I managed to make those pieces make sense ;-)
This is different, different good :) Like everyone who's commented here, I too think that maybe Dan/Kelly happened because of the flash forward. Not only that, Kelly is quite insistent and sure about what he saw. His persistence might've had a hand in Dan finally coming to terms with his feelings for Kells and what he saw. Just my thought. This is almost like a sci-fi movie. I loved it.
Kelly's persistance certainly played a role, but I'd like to think it would have happened anyhow. Writing this was a spur of the moment thing, and I'm glad you like it :-)
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What I love the most is that you don't know whether it was supposed to happen and they got closer because of the flash forward, or that it happened because they got closer.
If that makes sense.
Great stuff, babes.
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Thank you very much!
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I can only second Tine's thoughts, it's really interesting because you don't know if it would've happened if they hadn't had that flash forward!
I also really like the leaps in time and how we only get to know little moments of this one year, but how somehow everything falls into place at the end :)
really well done! :)
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Thank you, I was quite surprised that I managed to make those pieces make sense ;-)
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Like everyone who's commented here, I too think that maybe Dan/Kelly happened because of the flash forward.
Not only that, Kelly is quite insistent and sure about what he saw. His persistence might've had a hand in Dan finally coming to terms with his feelings for Kells and what he saw. Just my thought.
This is almost like a sci-fi movie. I loved it.
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Writing this was a spur of the moment thing, and I'm glad you like it :-)
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very good.
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