Delicate (Jack/James NC-17)

[foxxcub]

Title: Delicate
Pairing: Jack/James
Rating: NC-17
Summary: James didn’t know why it mattered so much to him, the fact that he knew Shephard was lying.
A/N: set shortly after uberaeryn’s "The Long Way Home".

Comments

[halfdutch]

*dies from teh angst*

*revives, dies from the smut*

Seriously, your best J/J fic yet. SO. FUCKIN'. GOOD. Jack's nightmare was just so raw. Goosebumps.

I can take it

*wibbles*

These lines (and about a dozen others) just made me melt:

James wonders how he’s gone this long without his touch. Without going insane.

He wonders how many other scars Jack’s hidden.

LOVE IT. LOVE YOU. <<<333

[foxxcub]

I feel like much of this is now a collaborative effort on your part! I should add a dedication to you, LOL. XD

*tackles and snogs to death*

[halfdutch]

*bows to you*

Awww. No need, babe. I feel like all of the fics are collaborative, since you've been so gracious and generous about sharing your boys! I can't wait to see where you take them next.

;-D

[crystalkirk]

Guh. So very amazing. Hot and beautiful...and just so wonderful. Loved it. :)

[foxxcub]

*blushes*

Thank you so much, babe! Glad I'm being somewhat consistent, LOL!

[strutterms]

*flails*

*loves*

*skitters off to write a follow up*

And for the record? Yeah...am more your bitch with every fic. *nods*

[foxxcub]

Ooo, yay for follow-up and yay for my own personal bitch!

*pets*

[eponine119]

I just loved this.

The hotel room and the nightmare were brilliant ideas. And the dialogue simultaneous with the smut is so incredibly hot and sexy.

The whole story is just beautifully written, too, from the very first line. Full of all those little details that make it real, like when James catches Jack rubbing his cheek in the gym.

[foxxcub]

Thanks! Sometimes I worry that it's too talky whenever I combine dialogue with smut, but I'm glad you enjoyed it!

You should totally write in this verse...*runs away*

[eponine119]

Whoa, flattery!

way too scared to even try it

[foxxcub]

*chants*

DoitDoitDoit :D

[ambiguousreason]

for some reason the word "cute" came to my mind after reading this, but.. that doesn't exactly seem like an appropriate reaction. haha. either way, though, this is wonderful (as always, der). :P

[foxxcub]

LMAO, it was actually a lot more "cute" in the original draft. ;D I'm getting sappy in my old age...

Thanks, luv!