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tremmy_chii August 6 2011, 19:52:17 UTC
He can’t help it, can’t hold back the feeling; it’s hard not to fall, when every time he looks in the mirror, he sees the person he loves the most.

;A; I - Idk the mirror and Kwangmin does something to my heart and I'm all ASGKLHSGL THAT IS SO SWEET BUT OMG HOW WRONG BUT OMG, TWINS THAT LOVE EACH OTHER HAVE SUCH TWISTED FATE. And the only reason why I think it's Kwangmin is because of this:

The boy thinks that the other one’s smile shines brighter than the sun, and he tries not to get blinded by it as he steals glances from the passenger’s seat.

Sun is yellow. Yellow can be blonde hair. Blonde hair is Youngmin! \O/ LOL... XD

Anyway, I love this so keep writing boyfriend fics! 8D There aren't enough out there! Thank you for sharing! ^________^

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forevershining February 16 2013, 08:45:47 UTC
Wow I swear I replied to this but apparently not? ughghu I'm so sorry ; ; ;

but thanks so much for this comment! I'm really sorry I never really wrote any other boyfriend fics after this one ahah, I really don't write as often as I did anymore, but I really do appreciate you reading this and even taking the time to quote things bc jdkgnhgfohjnf i love it when people quote thing I just-- idk but sob ; u ; thank you again and sorry for this late reply ahh. <3

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aishi07 August 7 2011, 16:39:14 UTC
His breath fogs it up a bit, and when he wipes it off with the back of his hand, he smiles and touches the surface of the mirror, laughing slightly to himself as tears start falling down his face.

Tears literally started to form in my eyes when I read those lines. This was beautiful. Sad, but really good. Thank you for posting. ;A;

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forevershining August 16 2011, 06:51:29 UTC
awww. ; ~~ ; sorry bb haha but no problem, thank you for reading~

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jishu August 8 2011, 12:51:37 UTC
aaaww..... it's just sad T_T

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forevershining August 16 2011, 06:51:06 UTC
mhm. ; u ; Thanks for reading~

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magickismight August 9 2011, 02:28:27 UTC
oh my gosh ;____; so sad~ but I'm glad there's finally a real youngmin/kwangmin fic <3 I love those two.

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forevershining August 16 2011, 06:50:52 UTC
sobs ty for reading. ♥

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ovengrills January 10 2012, 16:55:41 UTC
THIS IS SO PRETTY but really sad ;______;

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forevershining February 16 2013, 08:41:24 UTC
oh man this reply is like, what, a year late? Ahaha omg I'm so sorry but thank you!! ; uu ;

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