Lover Left Bleeding - Chuck/Blair - Chuck POV - 1/2

Feb 21, 2008 23:25

Title:Lover Left Bleeding
Author: force-oblique
Rating: G, PG - Possibly AU
Disclaimer: I dont own anything! :P
Characters/Pairings: Chuck/Blair
Spoilers/Warnings: None in particular..:D
Word Count: 906
Summary: 1x13 - related , a take of what could have happened after Blair left Chuck at the bar.
Author's Notes:English is not my native language, so don't ( Read more... )

gossip girl, fanfiction, blair, fic, chuck, gossip girl fanfiction, chuck/blair fanfiction, blair/chuck

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sotiria_auth February 22 2008, 04:48:52 UTC
This is beautiful!!!!

I loved this part:
Couldn’t she feel that he was too stern, too stiff to be him? That he talked of contempt ,of her being insignificant, of not having feelings for her with no emotion in his voice?

Not even to express this contempt?

If her really didn’t want her, if the sight if her didn’t burn him still, then why was he avoiding, refusing to look at her?
It should be nothing for him, right?
Then why not look at her?

Why bother look the other way when he could relish at her anguish, her pain and her humiliation, if that was what he really wanted?

But he didn’t look at her because he couldn’t see her like this, so broken and sorrowful, so desperate and know that he was the cause of that.
I was thinking the same thing!!

And now he is in her house.....
Can't wait to see what will happen between the two.....Making up perhaps?

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force_oblique February 22 2008, 05:17:43 UTC
OMG, Sotia this is my favorite part too!!

I really needed a better explanation of why he spoke to her like that but towards the end he refusedto look at her only breaking at the end when she couldnt see he was watching her!!!

Hehe, you will see!
Thanks for your nice words!

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sotiria_auth February 23 2008, 19:10:06 UTC
I agree, at first he couldn't look at her then suddenly he crashed her by looking at her sayingall that about the horses and then he refused to look at her again.
It didnt make sense. You could say that he thought it was beneath him to look at her but he wanted to hurt her so why not look at her when she was turned into nothing?

But in the end he turned to look at her... so he must care!!!

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force_oblique February 23 2008, 19:13:56 UTC
This is exactly what I meant!!
I'm so glad that I got through to you so clearly or that you were under the same impression already, whichever applies! lol

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cryzzel March 2 2008, 00:46:11 UTC
He could see that clearly now.
He didn’t hate her, he didn’t resent her. He loved her and he needed her.

Yes he does... He loves her. She means everything to him, and he bled oh my goodness he bled!!!!!!!! And he did't know it, and he didn't care, because he loves her.

Is there going to be a part two hun?? Cause I can't wait what they have to say to each other!!!!! Its so good, yet again, i love that you didn't really do it in real time, it's more inside their head, what they're thinking.

Oh my goodness he bled! <3 For her! <3

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force_oblique March 2 2008, 20:49:18 UTC
Awwww!
I am so happy that you liked it!!
Haha, yeah it's all in their head or rather in Chuck's head...
This is what I usually do..I write more about feelngs!
Heh, yep, he bled.... He was too torn up inisde to notice that he got torn on the outside too! =]
I love that couple so much, I really think that he loves her! Maybe more than she will ever love him..

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cryzzel March 2 2008, 21:20:37 UTC
Hahahah
"I really think that he loves her! Maybe more than she will ever love him.."

True! I also say,

Nate will never love Blair as much a Chuck did!

So... Chuck is the man for Blair, i mean, he loves her man >.> more than anyone ever has, more than the damn potato (thats what i call Nate, heheh) ever can :( . So sad Blair is stubborn to figure that out :(

I hope the next 5 eps, it shows :( again. I miss Chucks looks for Blair :(

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force_oblique March 2 2008, 21:27:01 UTC
Haha you call Nate the potatoe? Hehe, thats harsh! lol

But he does seem to lack in the passion territory...
On the other hand Chuck is stylish and passionate at everything he does! lol

But Blair is soo stubborn even more than Chuck...
I doubt the next 5 epies will go smoothly...
I hope they will ge together again or that Chuck tortures Blair a little more...But yay a little stalking would be cool, especially since it will make clear that Chuck still loves her and didnt mean the things he said!!

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mikss March 9 2008, 20:58:32 UTC
ohh YAY! i really really liked it!! :DDDD hope u update soon!! can´t wait to find out what is going to happen!!!

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force_oblique March 10 2008, 00:25:19 UTC
Thank you so much!!

Yeah, I have been meaning to finish it, but it's weird life stuff catching up eith you, you know?

Heeh, anyways, I'm glad you liked!

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greekgrl09 March 10 2008, 03:22:40 UTC
OMG!!! great story. are you going to continue with it?? please tell me yes.

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force_oblique March 10 2008, 08:56:59 UTC
Thank you so much!!
I definately will, It's just that I've been sick and bogged down with work that it's taking me so long to update!
=P

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