Lover Left Bleeding - Chuck/Blair - Chuck POV - 1/2

Feb 21, 2008 23:25

Title:Lover Left Bleeding
Author: force-oblique
Rating: G, PG - Possibly AU
Disclaimer: I dont own anything! :P
Characters/Pairings: Chuck/Blair
Spoilers/Warnings: None in particular..:D
Word Count: 906
Summary: 1x13 - related , a take of what could have happened after Blair left Chuck at the bar.
Author's Notes:English is not my native language, so don't ( Read more... )

gossip girl, fanfiction, blair, fic, chuck, gossip girl fanfiction, chuck/blair fanfiction, blair/chuck

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sotiria_auth February 22 2008, 04:48:52 UTC
This is beautiful!!!!

I loved this part:
Couldn’t she feel that he was too stern, too stiff to be him? That he talked of contempt ,of her being insignificant, of not having feelings for her with no emotion in his voice?

Not even to express this contempt?

If her really didn’t want her, if the sight if her didn’t burn him still, then why was he avoiding, refusing to look at her?
It should be nothing for him, right?
Then why not look at her?

Why bother look the other way when he could relish at her anguish, her pain and her humiliation, if that was what he really wanted?

But he didn’t look at her because he couldn’t see her like this, so broken and sorrowful, so desperate and know that he was the cause of that.
I was thinking the same thing!!

And now he is in her house.....
Can't wait to see what will happen between the two.....Making up perhaps?

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force_oblique February 22 2008, 05:17:43 UTC
OMG, Sotia this is my favorite part too!!

I really needed a better explanation of why he spoke to her like that but towards the end he refusedto look at her only breaking at the end when she couldnt see he was watching her!!!

Hehe, you will see!
Thanks for your nice words!

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sotiria_auth February 23 2008, 19:10:06 UTC
I agree, at first he couldn't look at her then suddenly he crashed her by looking at her sayingall that about the horses and then he refused to look at her again.
It didnt make sense. You could say that he thought it was beneath him to look at her but he wanted to hurt her so why not look at her when she was turned into nothing?

But in the end he turned to look at her... so he must care!!!

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force_oblique February 23 2008, 19:13:56 UTC
This is exactly what I meant!!
I'm so glad that I got through to you so clearly or that you were under the same impression already, whichever applies! lol

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sotiria_auth February 23 2008, 19:10:58 UTC
Hehe "beneath him" where did that come from?
Must be Buffy!!!
Hehe she told Spike the same thing! lol

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force_oblique February 23 2008, 19:12:51 UTC
Omg, i thought of the same thing!!!

And we both know that even if Buffy said that,she didnt really man it, she believed in him!
I think Chuck and Blair both believe in each other :D

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