kiss with a fist

[spyglass_]

Title: Kiss With A Fist
Rating: M
Disclaimer: Yeah, right.
Spoilers: 3x08
Summary: “You forget that I only ever let you win because I want to.”
Word Count: 2161
Author’s Notes: I started this as part of Porn Battle XI, but then life happened and I’m only finishing it now. It’s set post-3x08 in an AU where Jane and Lisbon are already in an

Comments

[h_loquacious]

Giggle! Squee! Yay for creaky!fic! La la la la la la.... hee. Oh, I enjoy it so. And I wasn't expecting it to be like it was.

Squee again!

I'm sorry, were you expecting some sort of substance in this review review? Because that's not happening. I'm just going to sit here all giggle and flail.

Oh, I flove them. You get couch!icon.

Show! Why aren't you this awesome?

[spyglass_]

LOL. You weren't expecting it to be like it was? Well, neither was I :P Seriously, I had other plans, and then... this happened. IDEK.

Meh, substance is overrated. YAY for couch!icon.

I'm going to ask Show for a job. Soon. I could straighten their issues out PRONTO.

[h_loquacious]

Well, based on your rambly description I was expecting something different. Even with the change of plans.

Mel thinks show should let us be on some sort of advisory panel. However, we've been told we're probably not the kind of people whose opinion they want/care about. Basically we're too smart and too sarcastic.

Still, I feel you could improve show significantly. Just by periodically going up to BH and yelling: "LISBON IS AWESOME! WHY DO YOU NOT REALIZE THIS?"

[spyglass_]

Yeah, I did something really crazy and just let the fic go where it wanted to go and to hell with my plans. Very unlike me.

Mel is (unfortunately) probably right. Also, we care about people other than Jane.

I want to write BH an essay about how he needs to be careful. Ugh. Show. I am dreading tomorrow.

[watchyouwalk]

WHY DOES THIS NOT EXIST? /poutage
Lisbon was totally reading my mind toward the end there - if she was the one in control the whole time, that's certainly not the proper way for Jane to prove he isn't creaky.
*snorts* Creaky. Another one to add to my list of words that will never be looked at the same way, JS. (It's an increasingly long list... oops?)
AND THE APPLE. Plus fourteen awesome points, because Lisbon is obvs very persistent when it comes to fruit?
I love thiiis, it's so squee-inducing! <3

[spyglass_]

Yeah, see, Lisbon at the end? There was a whole long thought process that went into setting this up (even though it may not look like it). Lisbon was going to "let" Jane prove he isn't creaky, but then he encouraged her to apologize. Thus, she had to make her point. See what I'm saying? ;)

LOL. The end of 3x08 is so FULL of things that can be, you know, looked at in a new light. "You were kidnapped and delivered to me" is another one of those things.

Jane never DID get her that apple. So yes :P

Hee, I'm glad. Thanks :)

[anr]

Lovely! I really enjoyed reading this. :)