Prompt Post #2

Aug 10, 2011 09:16

Prompt Post 2
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Strip Parchis - FILLED [2/2] anonymous October 11 2011, 02:15:58 UTC
Xabi takes his turn and leans back on the bed, pretending to check his Blackberry but really trying to take a picture that doesn't exactly reveal Alvaro's lack of pants, but still gets most of his leg in the shot. Because, those thighs. Fuck.

When Raul realizes what he's doing, he pulls his hand away. But only for a second.

Xabi scores first and everyone loses their shirts. He can't keep his eyes off Alvaro - in only his compression shorts and an undershirt, why is he wearing an undershirt? Stupid - and Chori's hand, ghosting over his upper thigh. He swallows.

Sergio almost misses his turn twice in a row because he's really interested in his text messages, but he scores twice and Alvaro refuses to take his shorts off.

"I'll take this off," he says of the undershirt, "but I'm not going to sit here naked while everyone else still has clothes."

"Sore loser," Raul says, slipping his own shorts off. "Very unbecoming."

They even disregard the sock rule because Alvaro won't stop complaining - "You're a baby," Sergio tells him, but lets Alvaro take his socks off when Raul scores - but it's fine, because no one's really paying attention to the board anyway.

Xabi's phone beeps and while he takes a second to look down at it he's pretty sure Raul cheats, because on his next turn he gets his last two pieces off the board; Xabi is pretty sure he still had three left, but whatever. He's probably been cheating the entire time.

"Paul Pierce. Motherfuck," Alvaro spits, pushing the iPad away.

"I, uh. Gotta go," Sergio says quickly, throwing his clothes back on. "Fernando. He's been texting me, so -- "

"We get it," Alvaro says, waving him off.

When Sergio's gone, he turns to Xabi. "He was sexting the entire time. Otherwise he would have been mad that he lost." Xabi smiles.

"And, uh. You can stay," Alvaro starts, suddenly inarticulate. "If you -- I mean, but only if you want."

"You should stay," Raul adds. Alvaro raises his eyebrows, smiles.

And when he feels Raul's hand on his knee, Xabi says, "Yes."

Somehow, Raul ends up between him and Alvaro. Xabi doesn't mind; Raul is licking expertly at his cock while Alvaro takes the other man from behind.

And Xabi never expected to bear witness to the tenderness between them, especially during sex. Alvaro sucks kisses at the back of Raul's neck, his hands roaming his back and stomach and down to his cock. Making sure he's taken care of. Whispering, stuttering, "Raul, Raul, ah -- Raul," while all Xabi can do is watch.

Xabi lets Raul take him deeper into his throat and swallow around him. When he finishes, Alvaro kisses Raul on the cheek.

Raul leaves to brush his teeth - "Sorry, it's just -- " he starts, and Xabi just nods a little, understanding - and when Alvaro slips a hand between Xabi's legs, fingers pressing against his entrance, Xabi says, "No, no, just come up here, please -- " and after a second Xabi relaxes against Alvaro's mouth, thinking with a clear mind about the smooth, slow way Alvaro's lips move against his own.

Raul comes out of the bathroom and grunts, "Cute."

Alvaro laughs into Xabi's mouth.

The next day, when Cesc tells Xabi, "I wanna play Parchis with you guys, I always get left out," Xabi only smiles.

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Re: Strip Parchis - FILLED [2/2] anonymous October 11 2011, 05:11:16 UTC
AHHHHH A TEAM THREESOME!!!!!!! AUTHORANON YOU ARE MY FAVORITE. I AM IN FUCKING LOVE WITH THIS. Irrelevant detail that totally got me: the fact that Alvi Albi and Sergio stole XABI's iPad to play hahahaha this is the way it would actually happen. Also Raul as the instigator and the twins seducing (lovingly!) Xabi nghhhhhhh. not the OP but personally I could not be happier with this fill <3.

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Re: Strip Parchis - FILLED [2/2] anonymous October 11 2011, 05:35:14 UTC
This is the best. Not even kidding here this seriously is the best thing ever. Not op but goddamn this was good. I'm repeating stuff a lot but ugh this made a good day better. I kinda want more...Xabi/Alvaro/Albiol :3

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Re: Strip Parchis - FILLED [2/2] anonymous October 11 2011, 08:47:10 UTC
OP HERE!!!
Oh god author anon, I owe you my first- AND secondborn! Seriously, I didn't expect much when I prompted, but this fill is so amazing, I'm so excited about it and it pushed all the right buttons for me. NNNNGH SO HOT!! OT3 right there; I hope the world now realizes we need much more of the same in our lives on a daily basis.
And all the attention to detail - sexting with fernando is the only thing that would make sergio not care about the game anymore :D

thank you so, so much, you're the best! <3

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Re: Strip Parchis - FILLED [2/2] anonymous October 11 2011, 14:32:16 UTC
you flatter me, op, you really do ♥ BUT REALLY THEY ARE ABSOLUTELY PERFECT like ugh, i can't even deal with it. perhaps this will spurn others to recognize their greatness and write more of them? we can only hope!

shut up, YOU'RE the best. keep the a team prompts coming!

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Re: Strip Parchis - FILLED [2/2] anonymous October 11 2011, 09:57:14 UTC
ahhhhhhhhh this is flawless. there needs to be more albiol/arbeloa in the world. (and the bonus xabi! i like, i really do.) thanks for filling this, anon. <3

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Re: Strip Parchis - FILLED [2/2] anonymous October 11 2011, 18:25:20 UTC
TRIPLE A FOR THE WIN.
And for you authoranon, all the gold in my gold kingdom. Fantastic. <3

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Re: Strip Parchis - FILLED [2/2] anonymous October 11 2011, 23:29:35 UTC
omg you wrote my OT3! I love you authornon!

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Re: Strip Parchis - FILLED [2/2] anonymous October 12 2011, 03:12:37 UTC
I have no option but to join in on the resounding chorus of squeees for this! So perfect. I was so excited to see that someone filled this, and then it was crazy hot and completely accurate and adorable!

And, yay, this is the most Arbeloa/Albiol fans I've ever seen! We exist!

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Re: Strip Parchis - FILLED [2/2] anonymous October 12 2011, 22:50:49 UTC
When I first came into the fandom last summer, I expected this pairing to be among the old marrieds, just because it was so obvious and it had all the signs. And I thought noone was writing them (anymore) cause all the good fic had been written. I am still APPALLED to see I was wrong. APPALLED.

(Othernon here)

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Re: Strip Parchis - FILLED [2/2] anonymous October 13 2011, 04:14:25 UTC
Otheranon as in the author of the lovely Arbeloa/Albiol below? Authoranon here! We should tag team and get this pairing the love it deserves. Get a coalition going. Start a campaign. SOMETHING.

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Re: Strip Parchis - FILLED [2/2] anonymous October 13 2011, 04:42:01 UTC
*waves* not the anon above, but i am the author-anon of the fic below. so excited to see other people giving this pairing some love! :D

i'm definitely going to work on filling any more prompts of this pairing that come up. and i hope lots do. (i suck at prompting, or otherwise i'd do that, too.)

if you have any other campaign ideas in mind, please share! ♥

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Re: Strip Parchis - FILLED [2/2] anonymous October 13 2011, 05:22:55 UTC
No anothernon, I'm afraid. Just wanted to tell the commenter that I wasn't authornon answering. :)

But I'm all for campaigning! :D

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Re: Strip Parchis - FILLED [2/2] anonymous October 13 2011, 09:30:20 UTC
same thing happened to OP but I'm happy to see that the love for the pairing isn't missing, it was just in hiding and needs to come out and be celebrated now with tons of fic. :D

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Re: Strip Parchis - FILLED [2/2] anonymous October 12 2011, 22:53:10 UTC
Aaaahahahaha. This is just so wonderful and funny and sexy and THEM. I love A-Team fic.

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