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Re: Messi/Villa Licence To Kill Sequel 2/5 anonymous July 25 2011, 22:33:07 UTC

“I’ve been looking forward to seeing you again,” he says eventually, and it does feel strange, because he’s still not entirely sure what there is to like about Leo. “When I’m protecting someone, I won’t get close to them because that just gets in the way, I can’t have emotions interfering, I won’t be able to do my job. You may think I was being an asshole, but it was for your own good.”

“But I don’t need protecting anymore,” Leo says, and he’s closer now, his hand on David’s shoulder, he can feel it, even beneath his suit jacket. David bends his head down, presses his lips to Leo’s fingers. He thinks it’s time, time someone makes a move. He sees Leo’s lips twitch slightly and he brushes his thumb across David’s lips before removing his hand completely.

“No, you don’t,” David agrees. “But I haven’t been close to anyone in a really long time. I don’t think I even remember how.”

“That’s pretty fucked up,” Leo muses and David still hates that word, and he wants to tell Leo this, but he’s so tired, he doesn’t want to argue. “But I’m pretty screwed too, so maybe we’re even.”

David wants to reply, wants to question this, but Leo’s standing up now, holding his hand out to David, who takes it. David keeps their fingers locked as Leo leads them through the small apartment to his bedroom.

The room is only lit by the light flooding from the hallway, yet David can still see the shine of Leo’s eyes, and he bends his head slightly to kiss him, but Leo turns away, ducks his head to the side. Instead he pushes his hands up David’s chest, rests them beneath the lapels of his jacket.

“Did you come here to sleep or have sex?” Leo says, and David doesn’t think he’s ever been asked such a question before and he gives a small laugh, tries to just feel Leo, feel him warm against his body.

“Can’t we do both?” David asks, and it’s all he wants right now, he can’t think past tonight, past anything but Leo and this drab little box room. He feels Leo nods against him, and their eyes catch and David feels a jolt go through his body as Leo’s hands move from his chest up across his shoulders, pushing his suit jacket off and David just wants to grab him, kiss him, push his hands up and inside his clothes, just be so close it hurts.

“There’s not much that I’m good at,” Leo says, and he pushes David down onto his bed or David lets himself be pushed down, and climbs on top of him. “But I am very good in bed.”

“Yeah?” David asks, but it’s not even a question, he just watches Leo slowly remove layer upon layer of his clothes. Seeing Leo this close, it’s like somebody totally different. This isn’t the boy he saw all those months ago in the hospital, with his face like bloody mush. His hair is shorter now, his skin clear. David stares at the black of his eyes, the length of his eyelashes. He looks younger up close, more vulnerable. David reaches a hand out, to caress the side of his face, but Leo bats him away.

“Don’t get sentimental.” Leo’s tugging at David’s tie, loosening it with his fingers and swiping it away, before deftly undoing the buttons of his shirt. David can’t take his eyes off him.

“You just look so beautiful this close,” David can’t even control the words coming out of his mouth, not when Leo’s fingers are pressing into his sternum, fluttering down slowly, briskly undoing the clasp on his belt. Leo’s hand slips down, past the waistband of his boxers, his knuckles brushing against the base of David’s cock and his hips jolt up at the touch.

“Yeah, I bet.” Leo increases the pressure, and David hardens beneath his touch, ignoring the smirk Leo gives him. David is able to get a semblance of control back into his body, manages to wrap an arm around Leo’s waist, digs his fingers into the base of his spine, feels Leo arch forward, the first sign that he’s into it too.

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Re: Messi/Villa Licence To Kill Sequel 3/5 anonymous July 25 2011, 22:47:41 UTC
He takes this as his chance, is finally able to grab the back of Leo’s neck, and kiss him. It’s painful, Leo bites down deliberately hard, managing to reach between them and slip his hand back inside David’s pants.

David flops back against the bed, taking Leo with him and their teeth clash until Leo finally softens the kiss, his hand gripping the side of David’s face, and David runs his hands down Leo’s sides, presses firm enough to feel his ribcage and he hears Leo groan slightly, his hips shifting, his knee pushing into David’s crotch.

David slides one hand further south until he slips it down the back of Leo’s pants. He feels Leo’s hand claw at the sheets by the side of his head as he teases him, before he starts muttering something around David’s tongue, but he can’t make it out.

Then Leo starts to wriggle free, so that he’s sitting up in David’s lap, flush and panting. David doesn’t remove his hand straight away, but Leo reaches behind himself, until he has both of David’s hands wrapped tight in his own.

“I haven’t got any condoms; I’m not doing anything else without one. I don’t know where you’ve been.” Leo says, though his words don’t have the bite that’s intended. David, painfully hard now, and still restricted inside his own trousers, groans slightly, at Leo’s inability to just let things flow. Things would be running so much smoother if Leo let him have a little more control, or would give David a little more of himself.

“I have one in my wallet,” David says, feeling suddenly weightless as Leo climbs off of him and fishes for the wallet out of David’s discarded jacket. David can’t do anything but watch, watch Leo go through his personal belongings until he finds the familiar foil. David watches Leo’s lip curl as he stares at the red square.

“Strawberry flavoured? I thought spies were meant to be classy,” Leo says, but he crawls back onto the bed anyway, throws the condom at David and starts to peel his own clothes off. “I’m not sucking your cock.”

This isn’t really what David had been expecting. He’s not come here expecting sex, but he had imagined what it’d be like, if they were to do it, and it wasn’t at all like this. It was going to be quiet, no talking, he was going to take it slow, be gentle; a deep, lazy fuck. Not this, not removing the rest of his own clothes, his lips stinging from Leo’s teeth. He wasn’t planning romance, but this feels too far the other way.

“Leo, what are you doing? I can do that.” He says when he finally rids himself of his own clothes. He sees Leo naked and on his knees by the edge of the bed, using his own slick fingers to prepare himself, opening himself up for David.

“You’re pretty tired, I can tell, so you should let me do the work. I’m being accommodating, so you should just shut up.” Leo says, rolling the bottle of lube towards David before crawling over himself on his hands and knees.

David’s fumbling around for the condom when he hears Leo’s huff loudly, snatching the foil and ripping it open with his teeth. He grabs David’s thick cock, strokes it a few times before rolling the condom down in a smooth, fluid motion. Deep down, David really would like Leo to suck him off, but he guesses that’s asking too much and it feels kind of weird. Well, it feels amazing, but just not as intense, not as hot as he’s anticipated.

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Re: Messi/Villa Licence To Kill Sequel 4/5 anonymous July 25 2011, 23:33:30 UTC
David scrambles up so he’s sitting up against the headboard and flicks on the bedside light; because he wants to be able to see Leo, see his every movement. Leo laughs softly, waits for David to settle before approaching him.

Leo swings his leg over, so he’s sitting on David’s lap again, but his face has changed now. His features have softened, and he looks so young again, that David feels something jolt inside his chest, but then Leo’s grabbing him, kissing him softly again, just with his lips, no teeth now.

Leo pulls away eventually, reaching behind himself to guide David inside with surprising ease, and David doesn’t remove his eyes from Leo’s face and it’s hot, feeling his cock slide inside of Leo. His fingernails dig sharply into David’s collarbone, his brow heavy as he takes all of David inside.

David shifts, trying to get comfortable against the headboard but Leo tightens around him, groans and rests his damp forehead against David’s chin. David daren’t move, but runs his hand through Leo’s hair, and it nearly hurts, he’s so tight around him.

Then it’s like time starts up again, Leo leans in, kissing him again, his hips rotating as he relaxes more and more. David moves his hands up, around Leo’s throat, and every now and then he squeezes firmly, feels Leo’s pulse throb against his fingers as he starts to fuck himself harder on David’s cock.

Leo starts to rise up off his dick ever so slightly before sliding back down again, quickening the pace as he rides David. He can’t take all of his cock now; instead he reaches behind, wraps a tight fist around the base of David’s shaft.

And David knows Leo is closer than him, closer to coming, so he dips the hand wrapped around Leo’s neck down, starts to jerks him off roughly. And Leo starts cursing again, even more than normal, his teeth grazing David’s jawline. His breath is hot and wet against David’s neck as he comes fast between their bodies.

David’s not done yet though, he feels like he’s barely even started and there’s a renewal of energy pumping through him now, the lethargy of the evening replaced with adrenaline, and Leo’s slack against him, enough so that David can roll them over, pin him down and start to take control of their movements.

Leo seems to have enough awareness of what David wants-of what he needs, because he remains passive, just stares up at David, pushes his hands into the small of his back, steadying David’s thrusts, helping him goes deeper.

And David can’t even kiss him now, just stares and stares. And Leo looks so…vulnerable, so open, and then he starts whispering, and their lips are so close that the words seem to be falling from his lips and into David’s mouth, but he just whispers his name over and over. “David…David…David.”

And then David’s coming, harder than he expected and it takes what little breathe he has away as he collapses on top of Leo. He feels everything so much more acutely for the next few minutes, but Leo just holds him there, until he can finally find the strength to roll away.

“That was alright,” Leo says, but he sounds like he enjoyed it and when David finds the strength to turn his head to look at him, he’s smiling softly, his chest still rising and falling. “Sometimes it was really good, but then you tried to strangle me.”

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Re: Messi/Villa Licence To Kill Sequel 5/5 anonymous July 25 2011, 23:35:01 UTC
David laughs, but he can see the faint marks his fingers have left on Leo’s neck, he hadn’t realised he’d squeezed so hard. “Considering I haven’t had any sleep in thirty-six hours and that we’ve never done it together before, I think it went pretty well.”

“Yeah, I’ve had worse,” Leo says eventually, but his frown starts setting in again, so David reaches out, tangles his hand in Leo’s hair until Leo grabs his hand and pushes it away. “Maybe it’ll be better next time. If you want.”

“I do,” David replies, feeling that this is already too easy. He’s gone years now, without anyone, and already this is comfortable, but he can’t have comfortable in his line of work. Comfortable isn’t good if others find out. And no one can ever find out about this, David wouldn’t just lose his job if he was caught here, there’s so much more at stake than that.

And David suspects this isn’t just about the sex for Leo. It’s not that Leo wants more out of him, just that he wants to be able to have some connection with the person he was, or the friend he lost that no one else will remember. “Do you still miss him?”

“They won’t even tell me where he’s buried; I have every right to know, no one else ever cared,” Leo says, barely above a whisper. His eyes waver from David’s, his grip tightening on his hand. “There are a lot of things that you don’t know about me.”

“And you know nothing about me,” David replies, he can feel Leo’s knee pressing against his thigh and it feels good, it feels like it’s no big deal at all. “It needs to stay that way, too. It’s safer.”

“Ignorance comes naturally to me, I can pretend this is healthy,” Leo says, but it doesn’t really sound like a joke and David thinks he should pay attention to the warning signs in his head, but he’s adept at playing with fire. “I’m not going to fall in love with you, so don’t even think about doing the same.”

David laughs, “I’m not the sort, don’t worry.” And he’s really not; he’s not even sure if he believes in that kind of stuff, he’s always preferred his job to other people.

“You look like fucking shit,” Leo says, and it’s strange how an insult can sound so pleasant in the right tone. David doesn’t reply, just shuts his eyes, feels sleep finally smothering him, though not before he hears Leo mumble against his shoulder. “Wake me before you leave, maybe I’ll make you breakfast.”

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Re: Messi/Villa Licence To Kill Sequel 5/5 anonymous July 26 2011, 00:09:08 UTC
Oh my God! You wrote a sequel! =) And it's just so freakishly good. Genius!
I loved everything about it.
Cocky Leo is just brilliant and the way he and David interact... Men,absolutely typical, both pretending that they don't care.
My favourite line: "I’m not going to fall in love with you, so don’t even think about doing the same.” So far in denial that it's actually adorable.
I am addicted to your characters. Addicted, you hear me? And I know this already is the sequel, but I just keep wanting more because David as the icy spy and Leo as the "I don't give a fuck"-protegé are just too good!
Thank you so much for sharing!

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Re: Messi/Villa Licence To Kill Sequel 5/5 anonymous July 27 2011, 21:57:07 UTC
sorry for the late response- lj is being one crazy bitch.

(and maybepossibly, I'm writing one final piece to turn this into a trilogy, because I can't let go of David the Spy lmao, if that's cool with you?)

thanks!

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Re: Messi/Villa Licence To Kill Sequel 5/5 anonymous July 30 2011, 17:52:37 UTC
I can totally understand how you can't let go of him. =) Spy-Villa is absolute GOLD!
And I am basically jumping up and down on my chair because a third part to this would be AMAZING! So excited.

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Re: Messi/Villa Licence To Kill Sequel 5/5 anonymous July 27 2011, 20:42:44 UTC
Ah, the sex felt so real, as did the dialogue. Amazing sequel - loved it!

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Re: Messi/Villa Licence To Kill Sequel 5/5 anonymous July 28 2011, 20:03:50 UTC
Ah I love this so much. So happy to see you are writing another part!

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Re: Messi/Villa Licence To Kill Sequel 5/5 anonymous July 28 2011, 23:44:17 UTC
OP here!

OMG OMG OMG I finally got LJ to load and I find this KJDFJIFJIJFDJCKLJLKSJDKAJDKSJKDA FLAWLESS SEQUEL!! *____* Seriously, hot and beautiful and quite heartbreaking. And so fucking perfect ♥♥♥ I love this universe so much, thank you for creating it and thanks again for giving my prompt a shot :D

ps. I do want more!! :P

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Re: Messi/Villa Licence To Kill Sequel 5/5 anonymous July 29 2011, 19:45:48 UTC
oops, I thought someone else was the OP when they commented #idioten.
but yeah, one final part to make this into a proper ~thrillogy lmao.
aaand this is such fun to write, so thanks for such a great prompt :D

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Re: Messi/Villa Licence To Kill Sequel 5/5 anonymous July 31 2011, 05:14:57 UTC
final part sounds incredibly sad, you know? :| LOL I just don't want this to end :'(

And of course all I mean OMG, I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL YOU POST AGAIN!!1 Thanks again! :D

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