More of The Saints/ Some on PeinSaku
I've been writing so much lately and have been thinking of so many things and yet I still havent started Hardwire 8! But the good news is I have 2 of the Betaed chapters already and 3 & 4 on there way! So Rejoice men of the west! For Wrath! For Ruin! And the Red Dawn!
Alright lets get to the serious stuff now.
First up some stuff from The Saints.
I am getting a little annoyed with the current scene. Cause Sakura made a point of running background checks and stuff. And Sasuke is all yes good idea, we should run servalance as well cause they are just fluking it by bursting in and killing people. And Narutos all hum-haa-hummm but what if we jinx our luck by being all sure about stuff, fluking it seems to run it pretty well. Dx But Naruto's being all formal again, and Naruto isnt super formal, I mean he can be, but he isnt supposed to be more gut-instinct-y in this scene and he iiiiiisn't >.>;; Damn you Naruto.
I figure out Kakashi entrance scene, but I'm not quiet happy with it, I wanted it to be more 'I'mma suave bastard l3' Its not quiet flashy enough, but Iunno. Cause Naruto and Sasuke have super long 'we blew up some shit' intro (which parts of need re-wrting cause they just plain dont make sense -- and Naruto needs to blow up more stuff, Sasuke and him meeting needs to be far more explosive...), and Sakura has 'I bashed someone into the ground!' intro with a side does of Moral!Dilemma, with all this Kakashi's needs moooooare.
Sakura still has a wee bit of a Sasuke crush, because as much as many people like myself who like to pair Sakura with everyone ignore that part of Sakura's personality, I decided not too for once. Here's random ittle-bittle-bit. (the guns a real gun xD)
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Much like Kakashi, Sakura came with a few surprises, the first of which was her briefly displayed skill in hand to hand combat (which needed extra training because she left far too wide openings), the second of which was her fathers Type 38 bolt-action Ariska rifle.
More surprising than that was her apparent skill with it.
She loaded it quickly with minimum fuss and despite its length held, balanced it against her comfortably. She fired once, hitting her mark on the dummy - right in the middle of the neck.
“Its very old fashioned.”
Sakura nodded. “Yeah it’s a world war one model, but my father had it commissioned in honour of my grandfather, who fought in the war. Its kind of a heirloom, I never did anything with it…never thought I would need to…”
Naruto shrugged. “Its kind of useless in close fighting, you gotta load it, so slow and stuff.”
Sakura glared and hugged her rifle close. “I know that, but from far away, I could… you know…” she coughed and looked away.
“Blow someone’s brains to the wall?” Naruto ended brightly.
“Yeah… that.” Sakura mumbled.
Sasuke cuffed Naruto around the back of the head.
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Other News! I've been working on my PeinSaku, which I've deicided is going to be AU (again). So far Sakura works in a coffee shop, and Pein is a costumer. He somatimes comes with Konan, and Sakura wants to flirt with him but is like awnu! He's got a girlfriend Dx! But some how they get over this - Iunno how - and he asks her out or something and tells her stuff, and theres some philosophical stuff bout anarchy, and stuff. Pein's leader of underground anarchy group yadayada, theres some random Konan Sakura bonding and I draw a random conclusion about Pein being God~ Konan as ze Holy Spirit~ (cause she can flllllly and the spirit is a airborne thing, duh --in the manga, dont know how I am going to changed this so it adapts to the story, meybie she is a flight attendant? XD Lawl nu. Maybe a pilot or sommat.) And Sakura is the Holy Mother (which is actually the Holy Spirit in modern Catholisicism, BUT SHUDDAUP) cause she get preggggggy, with Gods son. lawl. But its not immaculate conception, I assure you. ZOMGLemon? Iunno yet.
However this is all liable to change providing I get a better idea. XD As this one could be a two shot iffffffffffffffffffff I drag it out/get carried away. xD
Kay so thats all done and thats all I wanted to say so far.
Cudos, Lily. xoxox
Alright lets get to the serious stuff now.
First up some stuff from The Saints.
I am getting a little annoyed with the current scene. Cause Sakura made a point of running background checks and stuff. And Sasuke is all yes good idea, we should run servalance as well cause they are just fluking it by bursting in and killing people. And Narutos all hum-haa-hummm but what if we jinx our luck by being all sure about stuff, fluking it seems to run it pretty well. Dx But Naruto's being all formal again, and Naruto isnt super formal, I mean he can be, but he isnt supposed to be more gut-instinct-y in this scene and he iiiiiisn't >.>;; Damn you Naruto.
I figure out Kakashi entrance scene, but I'm not quiet happy with it, I wanted it to be more 'I'mma suave bastard l3' Its not quiet flashy enough, but Iunno. Cause Naruto and Sasuke have super long 'we blew up some shit' intro (which parts of need re-wrting cause they just plain dont make sense -- and Naruto needs to blow up more stuff, Sasuke and him meeting needs to be far more explosive...), and Sakura has 'I bashed someone into the ground!' intro with a side does of Moral!Dilemma, with all this Kakashi's needs moooooare.
Sakura still has a wee bit of a Sasuke crush, because as much as many people like myself who like to pair Sakura with everyone ignore that part of Sakura's personality, I decided not too for once. Here's random ittle-bittle-bit. (the guns a real gun xD)
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Much like Kakashi, Sakura came with a few surprises, the first of which was her briefly displayed skill in hand to hand combat (which needed extra training because she left far too wide openings), the second of which was her fathers Type 38 bolt-action Ariska rifle.
More surprising than that was her apparent skill with it.
She loaded it quickly with minimum fuss and despite its length held, balanced it against her comfortably. She fired once, hitting her mark on the dummy - right in the middle of the neck.
“Its very old fashioned.”
Sakura nodded. “Yeah it’s a world war one model, but my father had it commissioned in honour of my grandfather, who fought in the war. Its kind of a heirloom, I never did anything with it…never thought I would need to…”
Naruto shrugged. “Its kind of useless in close fighting, you gotta load it, so slow and stuff.”
Sakura glared and hugged her rifle close. “I know that, but from far away, I could… you know…” she coughed and looked away.
“Blow someone’s brains to the wall?” Naruto ended brightly.
“Yeah… that.” Sakura mumbled.
Sasuke cuffed Naruto around the back of the head.
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Other News! I've been working on my PeinSaku, which I've deicided is going to be AU (again). So far Sakura works in a coffee shop, and Pein is a costumer. He somatimes comes with Konan, and Sakura wants to flirt with him but is like awnu! He's got a girlfriend Dx! But some how they get over this - Iunno how - and he asks her out or something and tells her stuff, and theres some philosophical stuff bout anarchy, and stuff. Pein's leader of underground anarchy group yadayada, theres some random Konan Sakura bonding and I draw a random conclusion about Pein being God~ Konan as ze Holy Spirit~ (cause she can flllllly and the spirit is a airborne thing, duh --in the manga, dont know how I am going to changed this so it adapts to the story, meybie she is a flight attendant? XD Lawl nu. Maybe a pilot or sommat.) And Sakura is the Holy Mother (which is actually the Holy Spirit in modern Catholisicism, BUT SHUDDAUP) cause she get preggggggy, with Gods son. lawl. But its not immaculate conception, I assure you. ZOMGLemon? Iunno yet.
However this is all liable to change providing I get a better idea. XD As this one could be a two shot iffffffffffffffffffff I drag it out/get carried away. xD
Kay so thats all done and thats all I wanted to say so far.
Cudos, Lily. xoxox