This is a critique post for Maryann from the Pokémon Special manga series by Hidenori Kusaka. Though not a major character by any means, she is present throughout most of the Ruby and Sapphire arcs, and I'm open to critique on her. No flaming, please.

IP is off, screening is on, anon is enabled. Thank you.

If you want to plot with Maryann or have any questions about goings-on, then this is the place to drop a comment. I can also PM'd at this account.

My AIM SN is ItsRainingChairs if you need that as well.

To be added, hopefully. ♥

[It's summer. The village feels emptier with all of the combatants missing. There isn't enough to snoop into for Maryann, so she decides to go and get a drink again. Only this time, she's not comparing notes or looking into things. No, she's much more relaxed. Good as time as any to talk to everyone, though.]

I've been here almost four months, and ( Read more... )

( Filtered to Gold, Red, Yellow, Blue, and Bill )

( Filtered to: Red, Yellow, Gold )

[The journal starts recording as soon as it's shoved onto the ground. At first, there's only the sound of some papers being shuffled around, the personal notes Maryann has taken.]

So that was it, huh...? An experiment. My first one, and I didn't even get affected at all! I don't know if that's good or bad... [A sigh.]

...Where did I put my journal--- ( Read more... )

Owowow...that really hurt! I'm not used to this! ...h-huh. Oh! It's open! Ignore that! I'm just...doing a little bit of exploring. Hey, so, can anyone tell me where the lake is? I think I'm a bit lost...

[True to her word, Maryann the Super Reporter is out and about. Still. She hasn't even picked an apartment, yet. It's not her style to be ( Read more... )

[Those on the lookout for New Feathers won't have far to look today for Maryann. She's made it all the way to the village on her own. Upon realizing that she wasn't at the Battle Frontier nor at the Petalburg Woods (the forest she was most familiar with), she had picked up the journal near her feet and started walking along the river. Sure enough, ( Read more... )